Shivon Mejias Poet Free verse

I Wish

Hello everyone after reading quite a few of your poems today I was inspired to write 
this one on the spot... I am at work and it took me 2mins to compose. I welcome 
feedback and I have about 50 poems from about the age of 14 to upload 
eventually… Love this site and you guys...


HERE GOES....

I Wish

I wish I could give you free reign to explore my mind to understand my motives and 
intentions
I wish I could do the same with yours so that every expression I utter you would get 
the meaning without misinterpretations

I wish I could explain ‘a feeling’ indeed so you would know exactly how I feel
I wish I could taste literally an emotion so somehow I could re-create that portion

I wish you could know, how much you would grow if only my wish could come true

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Marvel Godwyn May 16, 2011 at 10:50 AM Shivon, i truly like this poem, i think it's a reflection of a sincere heart.Its heart moving, i love it. Marvel Godwyn

Carol Sunshine Brown May 6, 2011 at 5:09 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shivon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Sonya Mcalpin May 5, 2011 at 8:05 PM beautiful! would be so wonderful if that were only possible......