I Will Tell You

You ask me why you need God, yes God with G capitalized
Whose only begotten Son’s precious life was sacrificed
I will tell you in simple words, not with that of the erudite
But those that come from my heart, and from the Book of Light.

I will start with a question, much like the one you posed
For in this way we each would know, it is truth I depose
Does a man need air to breathe? Does he need it to survive?
In the same way we need air, we need God in our lives.

You may say a man would die, without air instantaneously
Yet you have been fine all these years, thinks at God occasionally
Why are you then still alive, while His Son had to suffer and die?
But you forget Christ rose again, the third day, that’s no lie.

On man surviving without God, is rich and even popular
We cannot compare earthly time, with that of time eternal
What is man’s time on earth, but a hairbreadth, a tick
When he dies his soul’s destined, to a forever place he’s picked.

A masterpiece, a product, the maker has conceptualized
Comes with operating manual, functions fully harmonized
When that product is therefore used, without following instruction
It will cause a side effect, a malfunction or destruction.

Much like that of man therefore, though free will he was given
Created in God’s own image, to serve a purpose he's bidden
The design for which he was formed, because his heart is marked
An inner craving for higher being, for peace of mind he’d hark.

I may still go on and on, yet convince you I can’t be sure
I can only hope I have stirred, questions on eternal future
For I am sure you have heard of them, when staring death to its eyes
Those in God have peaceful smile, those who don’t sheer terror lies.

Let me end therefore with verse, His Word from the greatest Book
“I knew you before I formed you in your mother’s womb”, take a look
At how much God loves you, He knew you before you were born
He’s waiting, open your heart to Him, His grace is new every morn.


Note: Quoted verse - Jeremiah 1:5a

Tell Me - Poetry Contest - 2nd Place
Sponsor : Richard Lamoureux
30 March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/18/2015 6:03:00 AM
This is a very powerful poem! well constructed.
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Date: 4/28/2015 1:03:00 PM
Enjoyed your reasoning, Kim! You are deserving of a top win! Congratulations! // Just stopping by for a while (not back yet) visiting friends! All the best:) // paul
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Date: 4/26/2015 3:54:00 PM
I will have a great week, Thank you for the nice reply on my comment. LINDA
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Date: 4/25/2015 10:58:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:45:00 PM
What a joyous mouthful of words [look up the guff ;)] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2015 1:51:00 PM
Kim, I love this poem's exquisitely expressed devotion to God; indeed, to all that is sacred. Every line powerfully affirms your faith—and mine as well. Thank you for sharing a conviction you hold sacred. I have been blessed by reading your words, as well as your heart.
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:48:00 AM
Fantastic piece! Thanks for entering my contest!
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:34:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem, 7
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Date: 4/24/2015 12:09:00 PM
Words filled with wisdom...a wonderful write .Congratulations for your win,Kim.
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:20:00 AM
I respect your beliefs. Nicely written.
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:02:00 PM
Kim, my heartfelt congratulations to you for your 2nd Place podium win for your beautiful poem! Although you expressed it with different words and form, your poem and mine revolve around the same feelings and thoughts about our belief in God. I enjoyed your write very much. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/19/2015 1:55:00 AM
"In the same way we need air, we need God in our lives." Much needed wisdom here, Kim. I truly am grateful for such a beautiful piece! Thanks for posting and sharing! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/6/2015 4:30:00 PM
A superb poetic tapestry of truth you have spun. A7 and its a winer for sure.. Best of luck in that contest.
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Date: 4/5/2015 2:59:00 PM
What a magnificent write Kim----John
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Date: 4/4/2015 10:37:00 AM
What a beautiful weave of words that sing. A great tribute to your faith. A Fav.
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Date: 4/1/2015 1:59:00 PM
I have to say Kim, You have definately won across some lost soul with this wonderful piece!! What a beautiful write God Bless Kevin
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:59:00 AM
Very well penned, Kim. I especially like your reference to God's word as the "Book of Light." Your sharing of your faith in such a fascinating way is refreshing.
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Date: 3/31/2015 11:18:00 PM
“I knew you before I formed you in your mother’s womb”, take a look At how much God loves you, He knew you before you were born He’s waiting, open your heart to Him, His grace is new every morn - nicely done
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:00:00 PM
Kim, I am humbled by your response to tell me, your words are beautiful, a well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in. . .
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Date: 3/30/2015 11:12:00 PM
Very good job on a difficult presentation. I enjoyed the read. Our eternity hinges on our choices today. Let us hope and pray that more find the way.
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:23:00 PM
Easter is coming !!
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Date: 3/31/2015 11:19:00 AM
You are most welcome my Dear, “ Thank you sire, for your visit and reading my poem. ”, “ I Will Tell You ”. “ Happy Easter! Hugs and smiles :) Kim ”, And the same to you Kim. B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )
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