Durgaa Mundakana Poet Free verse

I will rise like a phoenix

My call is helpless
My pain is potent
My cry is desperate
With meaningless thoughts
My head is filled with distaste
Not a spark of hope around
With broken wings, I sit in a corner

But, with a glimmer of motivation 
I will find the spirits
Mysterious and magical
I will soar and glide
I will rise like a phoenix
With broken wings
Bold and beautiful

I will stab the vicious evil
I Will stand tall
I will rise like a phoenix
With broken wings
Bold and beautiful

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Sara Kendrick January 20, 2025 at 4:53 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara K Durgaa Mundakana January 21, 2025 at 11:37 PM Thank you, Sara.

Susan Ashley December 31, 2024 at 7:55 AM Dear Durgaa, the imagery of a restorative rebirth and renewal resonates beautifully within your verse. The feeling of determination to overcome hardship, to rise from the ashes, is palpable. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan Durgaa Mundakana January 1, 2025 at 6:42 AM Thank you Susan, for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. Your positive words mean a lot to me:)

Beata Agustin December 31, 2024 at 2:36 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. May God bless you with a prosperous New Year. Durgaa Mundakana January 1, 2025 at 6:40 AM Thank you so much for your comment. Wishing you a very happy new year!