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I will rise like a phoenix

My call is helpless My pain is potent My cry is desperate With meaningless thoughts My head is filled with distaste Not a spark of hope around With broken wings, I sit in a corner But, with a glimmer of motivation I will find the spirits Mysterious and magical I will soar and glide I will rise like a phoenix With broken wings Bold and beautiful I will stab the vicious evil I Will stand tall I will rise like a phoenix With broken wings Bold and beautiful

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2025 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara K

Durgaa Mundakana
Date: 1/21/2025 11:37:00 PM

Thank you, Sara.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2024 7:55:00 AM

Dear Durgaa, the imagery of a restorative rebirth and renewal resonates beautifully within your verse. The feeling of determination to overcome hardship, to rise from the ashes, is palpable. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Durgaa Mundakana
Date: 1/1/2025 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Susan, for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. Your positive words mean a lot to me:)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/31/2024 2:36:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. May God bless you with a prosperous New Year.

Durgaa Mundakana
Date: 1/1/2025 6:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment. Wishing you a very happy new year!