I Will Remain Yours

Will thou listen intently as the wind does blow gently to whisper my name within the breeze? Will thou recall inspired by thy heated desire such nights as thou did lie within mine arms? Can thou now hold her closely with my visage ghostly haunting thy mind and thy body firm? Wilst thou stand at the alter waiting there without falter while she walks towards you down the isle? Able you to lift her veil and know without fail that not my face you shall wish to see? Then as thou leaves the Church wilst thou be able not to lurch when pass by me, you behold me weeping in the pew?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hickman Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:58 PM
a deeply beautiful but as well deeply saddened piece to which you have penned so well if true your heart had to be breaking,,if just a muse very descriptive feelings and choice of lines,,,Blessings..Cecil
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:56 PM
This grabs with a pain of lost love!! Wow...a wonderful feeling ..as if watching a film...and we know the whole story...(hand me the box of tissues..please!!) Nice one Paula!! ps..thanks so much for the HM in your Blind Faith contest!! I'm so pleased you liked it!! :)
Chachere Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:35 PM
your word choice sounds so amazing.fits well with the depth of such passion in your poem.beautiful&lovely. -Always&Forever Lynette
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 6:40 PM
A very lovely and passionate poem with nice rhyming.
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