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I Will Paint You

You are everything blue and beautiful to me you are the only one white and wonderful to see you are the black box that knows all about me you often go red yet you’re more righteous than me you give me pink slips whenever I’m in the sinful sea you do not go brown nor sting me like the bee you give me yellow cards and pay my fiery fee you are the indigo strand in every rainbow that I see you are everything blue and beautiful to me you are evergreen and forever shall be. I’ll paint you Lord in every color I see

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Albert Reed

Date: 7/13/2009 6:42:00 PM

That is nice. How do you make poem of the week. You told me I make it but no one alerted me and how do I see it. Thanks! Albert Reed

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 1:20:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece of art I couldnt agree with James more on this one ... and also TY for you comments on my poetry I am new at this And It inspires me to know that people are enjoying my poetry thank you so much Love Jayne x x

James Peranteau

Date: 7/11/2009 12:35:00 PM

Adeleke,...this is a wonderful piece of art,..a great painting of your beautiful faith ! TY for your inspiring comment !!! james

Shirley Madeleine

Date: 6/15/2009 2:29:00 PM

Nice, this is so wonderful. I really like it. Keep up the good work.

Janetta Harrington

Date: 6/9/2009 8:33:00 AM

this is very, very beautiful adeite. it builds to a crescendo. janetta

Zoe Lambert

Date: 6/6/2009 10:56:00 AM

The Ordinary colors........But an extraordinary poem........!!! What an adorable write......!!!!!.......I love this Adeleke........Gord will surely bless you with more and more creativity........!!......>Crystal

David Smalling

Date: 6/5/2009 7:21:00 AM

This poem should be placed on the walls of the United Nations, made in plaque and sent Israel and Palestine, it is a great poem of universal faith, and a beautiful one.

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 6/2/2009 8:46:00 AM

It's great!

Roderick Antonio Jones

Date: 6/1/2009 3:39:00 AM

I like this poem "I'LL PAINT YOU" Adeleke. Your flow and style stand out as well. Good work, and you keep writing too. Also, thanks for your comment about my poem COLLEEN.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 10:33:00 PM

this goes to my favourites-a rainbow He is,magnificant beauty,to paint our God in such ways reflects your beautiful pallette you own in your heart--bravo-charma

Joanne Carty

Date: 5/31/2009 3:45:00 PM

this is beautiful.

James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 12:29:00 PM

Beautiful use of colors Adeleke, and you have transformed them into a lovely poem>James

Diane Christian

Date: 5/31/2009 11:28:00 AM

Amen, a beautiful poem, I wrote a poem called the rainbow and it is wonderful to paint our Lord in every colour we see, he madr those glowing colours, so woooow God bless you from diane