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I Will Die Eagerly

I will die eagerly, ready to go, surrounded by neons faeries, elves, imps I will die happily, in my own way lying next to my garden surrounded by orbs I will die gracefully, gladly and fully ready adoring the heavenly ancestors who come fetch me. I will die with a smile remembering my phenomenal fantastic make believe world my family, and my friends.

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Pratap Roy

Date: 12/13/2019 1:27:00 AM

Another good poetic expression. God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:47:00 AM

Thank you. I did have fun with this one.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/4/2019 1:35:00 PM

Hello Caren, well this poem is not morbid it is cheery. Well I see it this way. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:47:00 AM

I was trying to help make death happier! Thank you for letting me know I may have accomplished it.

Susan Jeavons

Date: 9/1/2019 9:25:00 PM

Poems about death are usually rather morose. Your's is sort of playful. I like it Caren. Hugs, Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 9:59:00 PM

Death to me is just "death of the flesh" - since I do not believe in soul death, it is easy to be playful with it, Susan.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/1/2019 8:12:00 PM

Another POTD! Bravo Caren! You shine through.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 9:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra. I appreciate your stopping by!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/21/2019 10:13:00 AM

I missed this, Caren! Belated Greetings Pangiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:50:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota. I was surprised but greatly pleased.

Robertina B.

Date: 8/20/2019 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Caren.. Your talent continues to shine.. A wonderful and comforting free verse, my friend.. This is a fav for me!! Have a blessed day!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/20/2019 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Robertina! I appreciate it!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/19/2019 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD! Truly captures your essence.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Kim. I enjoyed writing it too.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2019 9:14:00 AM

What a way to go! Congrats on POTD, Caren! Best wishes, gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. It was a day after I missed posting any poems because I was too exhausted to post any. First week of school with children - at two different schools. A week that was exceedingly fun, but difficult for it stole so much energy.

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2019 4:35:00 AM

Always great do die with a smile, but not sure if it is possible... congrats on POTD..

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2019 7:08:00 AM

Thank you. It was a lovely surprise!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2019 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:49:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/16/2019 8:11:00 PM

Amazing poem dear Caren, congrats on your POTD. xo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:49:00 AM

Thank you Pixie Dust.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/16/2019 6:23:00 PM

I will love this poem forever...congrats on your POTD ...I wish you a long and happy life but it looks like you have it all figured out for the end...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:50:00 AM

I pretty much could go now or in fifty years. I am ready and have no choice anyway.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/16/2019 6:08:00 PM

Congrats Caren on poem of the day with this true to life depiction..well done!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:50:00 AM

Thank you so much. I was pretty excited!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/16/2019 4:35:00 PM

Congrats on POTD. Here’s to a long life and the journey to follow. Hugs Rick.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM

Thank you Rick. I appreciate it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/16/2019 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations for your POTD Caren! You are so creative !

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I am truly honored.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/16/2019 1:08:00 PM

Life is worth the living, and we know there is a better place waiting. In your thoughts, you have such a wonderful attitude, concerning death. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Brandy. I am not saying "come and get me death," but I am saying "when you do, I am ready."

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/16/2019 9:41:00 AM

Looks like you touched a nerve in many people who want to have just this attitude. Congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:53:00 AM

I was surprised but pleased. Thank you Sunlite.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2019 7:50:00 AM

many congrats on POTD... hope its many years before you go!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:54:00 AM

I am not jumping into the scythe or anything. Ha!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/16/2019 7:50:00 AM

Don't you be going yet!...we need you here at the soup...and congrats!! on POTD!! Caren...when you go, let me know and I'll come with...sending anchors to the ground lol...^WW^ :o)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM

When I go, I will go out making so much noise the Earthlings will laugh. It will be a merry, happy dance noise.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 7:33:00 AM

- If ... we got to choose ... - Lovely written, Caren :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. This was such a TERRIFIC surprise!

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 8/16/2019 7:08:00 AM

Would hate to see you go Caren…Love your writing and your support of mine. Congrats!…POTD.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM

Than you Charlie. At least we got to know each other when right? Ha!

Maria Williams

Date: 8/16/2019 6:02:00 AM

A lovely way to go Caren, congratulations on your well deserved POTD....Maria Hugs

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Maria. I am always so stunned when something this nice happens to me. Loved it!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/16/2019 5:31:00 AM

Very nice Caren. Congratulations on POTD!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Charles. I am so grateful.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/16/2019 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! Enjoyed!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:57:00 AM

Thank you Tania. I was surprised, pleased, and gobsmacked when Tom knew about it at 2:21 a.m. I certainly did not!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2019 2:21:00 AM

A lovely way to go Caren, congratulations on POTD. Tom.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2019 3:59:00 AM

I was so exhausted last night I went to bed without posting poems or anything. This is my first week of school at two schools! Good grief! Poem of the Day, and I missed it! Geesh!