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I Will Die Eagerly

I will die eagerly, 
ready to go, 
surrounded by neons
faeries, elves, imps

I will die happily, 
in my own way
lying next to my garden
surrounded by orbs

I will die gracefully,
gladly and fully ready
adoring the heavenly
ancestors who come fetch me.

I will die with a smile 
remembering my phenomenal 
fantastic make believe world
my family, and my friends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/13/2019 1:27:00 AM
Another good poetic expression. God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:47:00 AM
Thank you. I did have fun with this one.
Date: 9/4/2019 1:35:00 PM
Hello Caren, well this poem is not morbid it is cheery. Well I see it this way. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:47:00 AM
I was trying to help make death happier! Thank you for letting me know I may have accomplished it.
Date: 9/1/2019 9:25:00 PM
Poems about death are usually rather morose. Your's is sort of playful. I like it Caren. Hugs, Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 9:59:00 PM
Death to me is just "death of the flesh" - since I do not believe in soul death, it is easy to be playful with it, Susan.
Date: 9/1/2019 8:12:00 PM
Another POTD! Bravo Caren! You shine through.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/1/2019 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra. I appreciate your stopping by!
Date: 8/21/2019 10:13:00 AM
I missed this, Caren! Belated Greetings Pangiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2019 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota. I was surprised but greatly pleased.
Date: 8/20/2019 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Caren.. Your talent continues to shine.. A wonderful and comforting free verse, my friend.. This is a fav for me!! Have a blessed day!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/20/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Robertina! I appreciate it!
Date: 8/19/2019 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Truly captures your essence.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Kim. I enjoyed writing it too.
Date: 8/18/2019 9:14:00 AM
What a way to go! Congrats on POTD, Caren! Best wishes, gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. It was a day after I missed posting any poems because I was too exhausted to post any. First week of school with children - at two different schools. A week that was exceedingly fun, but difficult for it stole so much energy.
Date: 8/18/2019 4:35:00 AM
Always great do die with a smile, but not sure if it is possible... congrats on POTD..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you. It was a lovely surprise!
Date: 8/16/2019 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 8/16/2019 8:11:00 PM
Amazing poem dear Caren, congrats on your POTD. xo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you Pixie Dust.
Date: 8/16/2019 6:23:00 PM
I will love this poem forever...congrats on your POTD ...I wish you a long and happy life but it looks like you have it all figured out for the end...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:50:00 AM
I pretty much could go now or in fifty years. I am ready and have no choice anyway.
Date: 8/16/2019 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Caren on poem of the day with this true to life depiction..well done!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much. I was pretty excited!
Date: 8/16/2019 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. Here’s to a long life and the journey to follow. Hugs Rick.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Rick. I appreciate it.
Date: 8/16/2019 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations for your POTD Caren! You are so creative !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I am truly honored.
Date: 8/16/2019 1:08:00 PM
Life is worth the living, and we know there is a better place waiting. In your thoughts, you have such a wonderful attitude, concerning death. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Brandy. I am not saying "come and get me death," but I am saying "when you do, I am ready."
Date: 8/16/2019 9:41:00 AM
Looks like you touched a nerve in many people who want to have just this attitude. Congratulations!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:53:00 AM
I was surprised but pleased. Thank you Sunlite.
Date: 8/16/2019 7:50:00 AM
many congrats on POTD... hope its many years before you go!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:54:00 AM
I am not jumping into the scythe or anything. Ha!
Date: 8/16/2019 7:50:00 AM
Don't you be going yet!...we need you here at the soup...and congrats!! on POTD!! Caren...when you go, let me know and I'll come with...sending anchors to the ground lol...^WW^ :o)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM
When I go, I will go out making so much noise the Earthlings will laugh. It will be a merry, happy dance noise.
Date: 8/16/2019 7:33:00 AM
- If ... we got to choose ... - Lovely written, Caren :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. This was such a TERRIFIC surprise!
Date: 8/16/2019 7:08:00 AM
Would hate to see you go Caren…Love your writing and your support of mine. Congrats!…POTD.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:55:00 AM
Than you Charlie. At least we got to know each other when right? Ha!
Date: 8/16/2019 6:02:00 AM
A lovely way to go Caren, congratulations on your well deserved POTD....Maria Hugs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Maria. I am always so stunned when something this nice happens to me. Loved it!
Date: 8/16/2019 5:31:00 AM
Very nice Caren. Congratulations on POTD!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Charles. I am so grateful.
Date: 8/16/2019 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Enjoyed!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2019 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Tania. I was surprised, pleased, and gobsmacked when Tom knew about it at 2:21 a.m. I certainly did not!
Date: 8/16/2019 2:21:00 AM
A lovely way to go Caren, congratulations on POTD. Tom.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2019 3:59:00 AM
I was so exhausted last night I went to bed without posting poems or anything. This is my first week of school at two schools! Good grief! Poem of the Day, and I missed it! Geesh!
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