I Will Come Back Johnny-I Promise

My soul hangs half alive on the barbed wired fence
My body all bloody and my heart refusing to dance

My mind races to the battle field 
The image of that dignified soldier waiting to be killed 
I feel his faint heart beating as my cold lips depart him with a kiss
I hear my voice, “I will come back Johnny; I promise!”
There is no time to stop
There is a battle to be fought
Out of the hundreds, a few of us make it to the borders
There is no ranked officer to give us any orders
My Venerable body now a river of tears 
In a glass building, opportunists celebrate with glasses of beers
My promise to return- Johnny’s only blanket in this cold 
Unlike a Hollywood star, my battered body not so bold
Johnny departs his suffering in a day
Mine to be embraced each night and forever with me to stay

My soul hangs half alive on the barbed wired fence
My body all bloody and my heart refusing to dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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artlyy Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 8:01 AM
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Hey hope you are well.. long time no see..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Wow!
Bangalee Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:23 PM
beautiful poetic expression
Wanter Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 6:19 PM
No one can know unless they experience it. So well written as if you do.
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