I Will Be Where You Are

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Season's change is a paradigm With rose hip seeds flying astray In the dusting of the Springtime Sweet scented thoughts of yesterday Winter days gone with gray and gloom Gardens filled with buddings that thrive Bold hued flowers burst into bloom and my memories come alive Moments that sparked love in my heart I cherish what they mean to me Always on my mind; in each thought Where you are, is where I will be Spring revives worthiness of life Renewing vows as man and wife May 21, 2023 In The Dusting of The Springtime... Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2023 7:15:00 AM

Such is needed in Spring. A scattering of love in our gardens coupled with love between husband and wife. Terrific sonnet.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/22/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thanks so very much for your thoughts, Victor.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2023 11:59:00 PM

what a wonderful uplifting theme you chose for the contest...In the words of John Paul young love is in the airrrrr everywhere I look around! hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/22/2023 7:20:00 AM

It is, Jan. There's much to look forward to this Spring, to Summer, to whatever comes next. Thanks so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2023 4:58:00 PM

- Yes, spring brings beautiful news .... also love in the air :) - A lovely poem, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 5/22/2023 7:19:00 AM

It truly does bring with it the rekindling of many things. Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/21/2023 4:18:00 PM

Very nice, Lin! Love that first verse and the final two!

Lin Lane
Date: 5/21/2023 4:25:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Kim.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/21/2023 11:21:00 AM

A difficult prompt to tackle Lin, love the analogous reflection within your sonnet, indeed success needs much balance in nature, as it does in marriage, all the best in contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 5/21/2023 11:26:00 AM

Thanks, David. I really liked the quote but wanted to take it somewhere off the well-beaten path. Many thanks for your supportive thoughts and cheers!