Lin Lane Poet Sonnet

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I Will Be Where You Are

Season's change is a paradigm
With rose hip seeds flying astray
In the dusting of the Springtime
Sweet scented thoughts of yesterday

Winter days gone with gray and gloom
Gardens filled with buddings that thrive
Bold hued flowers burst into bloom
and my memories come alive

Moments that sparked love in my heart
I cherish what they mean to me
Always on my mind; in each thought
Where you are, is where I will be

Spring revives worthiness of life
Renewing vows as man and wife



May 21, 2023
In The Dusting of The Springtime... Contest
Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2023 at 7:15 AM Such is needed in Spring. A scattering of love in our gardens coupled with love between husband and wife. Terrific sonnet. Lin Lane May 22, 2023 at 7:20 AM Thanks so very much for your thoughts, Victor.

Jan Allison May 21, 2023 at 11:59 PM what a wonderful uplifting theme you chose for the contest...In the words of John Paul young love is in the airrrrr everywhere I look around! hugs Jan xx Lin Lane May 22, 2023 at 7:20 AM It is, Jan. There's much to look forward to this Spring, to Summer, to whatever comes next. Thanks so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2023 at 4:58 PM - Yes, spring brings beautiful news .... also love in the air :) - A lovely poem, Lin :) - hugs Lin Lane May 22, 2023 at 7:19 AM It truly does bring with it the rekindling of many things. Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2023 at 4:18 PM Very nice, Lin! Love that first verse and the final two! Lin Lane May 21, 2023 at 4:25 PM Thanks so very much, Kim.

David Kavanagh May 21, 2023 at 11:21 AM A difficult prompt to tackle Lin, love the analogous reflection within your sonnet, indeed success needs much balance in nature, as it does in marriage, all the best in contest, cheers David Lin Lane May 21, 2023 at 11:26 AM Thanks, David. I really liked the quote but wanted to take it somewhere off the well-beaten path. Many thanks for your supportive thoughts and cheers!