L Milton Hankins Poet Free verse

I Will Always Love You

I will love you for the rest of my life, 
Feel your hair against my cheek, cascading 
Over my shoulder, the brush of your lips 
The warmth of your breath, whispering 
Tender words I needed to hear, my wife. 

In white coats and somber countenances 
They brought the worst of my nightmares 
“Ten months,” they said, “with treatments 
Less without...perhaps five” our experiences. 

You accepted your fate; I never saw you cry 
Two years now since you quietly slipped away 
And I miss you more with each passing day.

SECOND PLACE WINNER
Revised April 22, 2021
For "Grief" Contest
Sponsored by Line Gautier

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Sam Kauffman April 30, 2021 at 10:08 AM Your grief touches a deep place in the heart LM as do your words! So well done with such tenderness. Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings of consolation and prayers. L Milton Hankins April 30, 2021 at 10:47 AM Thank you, Sam, for your kind words and condolences. I am beginning to heal and move on, but it has been a difficult two years.

Sotto Poet April 28, 2021 at 3:56 PM Congratulations on your win for this beautifully penned sadness, well deserved, best regards dear friend L Milton Hankins April 28, 2021 at 4:32 PM Thank you so much, Lasaad. Thanks for the read and the kind comment.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 9, 2021 at 1:30 AM Hankins, so sorry for your loss. Having left organized religion. Don't you still believe you'll see her again? Job. 14:14,15? is" "If a man dies can he live again?" I love his answer "You will call, and I will answer you. You will long for the works of your own hands".Hope this gives you comfort. L Milton Hankins April 28, 2021 at 4:34 PM Hi Barbara, I have not stopped seeing her, actually. Thanks for your thoughtful comment. L Milton Hankins February 9, 2021 at 9:13 AM Thanks, Barbara. I do strongly believe in a spiritual life after death...but I'm not really sure what form that life will take.

John Hamilton February 3, 2021 at 4:56 PM So beautiful in it's sadness, losing a soulmate wow I feel for you! L Milton Hankins February 3, 2021 at 8:04 PM Thank you for your kind remarks, John. I appreciate it.

Nicola Davidson February 3, 2021 at 11:31 AM Beautiful L Milton Hankins February 3, 2021 at 12:38 PM Thanks, Nicola. Just a true expression of what happened and my feelings. I have other poems on the same theme because you just never get over your one true love.