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I Was So Offended My Head Fell Off

I was so offended my head fell off my independent body wandered lost it was a pain beyond all battlefields a bomb in my face while I held no shields oh so revolting the language insulting though I’m an adult I found myself sulking of course I could grow up but I’m immature if I’m sad I am noticed if not I’m ignored I’ve no personality my character bores but if I’m a victim my character roars this is my victory a victim in need give me your sympathy I am a weed words hurt yes words are the worst we disagree so I’m living a curse look at my head now detached from its perch speaking your mind with the Hell that it serves we’re not alike in our thoughts disagree I wake up in tears thinking Lord why me?

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Date: 3/10/2023 4:53:00 PM
Sharp-edged and topical, most arresting! Don't you mean "wandered" in line 2?
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Nick Trim
Date: 3/10/2023 5:49:00 PM
i do actually, well spotted lol

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