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I Was In Love With You

You weren’t there when I needed you. I only asked you for a few . But yet I thought you made me new. You always smelled like curve or morning dew. Why couldn’t you see that I was in love with you . Well its over and I don’t really know why . but I thought I should tell you that you the guy. I first fell in love with tore my heart in to two.

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Date: 6/2/2016 12:46:00 AM
amanda geraldon, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2011 12:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Amanda. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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