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I Was Here

Graffiti          fades          from          the          wall,
            Alike              the           alley        after          dark.
    "I                  was          here!",     screams      the
        Wrecking         ball,        leaving          your      mark.

Copyright © Kelly Deschler | Year Posted 2023

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Sotto Poet Date: 5/7/2023 11:56:00 AM Your imagery is striking, Kelly. Congratulations on your well deserved podium win. Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/23/2023 4:48:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind congrats :)

Len Gasun Date: 5/7/2023 12:35:00 AM Coming back to Congratulate you on your win my dear poet friend, Kelly! We both did it! Thanks again for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/18/2023 4:23:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind congrats, Len :)

Suzette Richards Date: 5/6/2023 10:31:00 PM Congratulations, Kelly, on your 2nd place win in my GRAFFITI contest with this stylised graffiti that fades from the wall. Suzette Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/16/2023 10:08:00 AM Thank you so much, Suzette... The contest theme was an interesting one to write about. I enjoyed the challenge :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/6/2023 7:19:00 PM So clever, your imagery! Congratulations, Kelly! Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/14/2023 6:14:00 PM Thank you for the kind congrats, Kim :)

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 5/6/2023 12:43:00 PM Here then, now gone. Cleverly written Kelly. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/10/2023 3:55:00 PM Thank you so much, Linda :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/6/2023 10:48:00 AM - ... skillful, Kelly :) - Congratulations :) - hugs Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 9/9/2023 6:45:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 5/5/2023 5:36:00 PM This is a powerful poem. Well written and thought provoking ! :) Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 8/17/2023 4:14:00 PM Thank you for reading, Heidi :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/2/2023 2:21:00 PM Oh!! I am wondering was it a true wrecking ball or someone doing more than just graffiti on the wall? I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 8/15/2023 2:02:00 PM Thank you, Sara ... In this poem, I wanted to send a message about leaving a lasting impression... Why leave only graffiti when you can knock down the wall? :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/1/2023 3:39:00 PM Your clever lines made me think of Banksy and his grafitti being vandalised hugs jan xx Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 8/12/2023 4:01:00 PM Thank you, Jan ... Sending hugs your way :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/1/2023 8:25:00 AM A creative write. Have a fun day writing away................ Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 8/7/2023 3:32:00 PM Thank you for reading, Paula :)

Len Gasun Date: 4/30/2023 5:25:00 AM Brilliant write for the contest my dear poet friend Kelly. I'm also thinking to join but no idea yet. I love what you did on the form, the image and I love the sweet ending. Good luck and best wishes in the contest my dear poet friend although your entry is already a winner in my book. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Kelly Deschler Date: 7/30/2023 4:16:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind comments, as always ... Hugs :)