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I Was Here

Graffiti fades from the wall, Alike the alley after dark. "I was here!", screams the Wrecking ball, leaving your mark.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/7/2023 11:56:00 AM

Your imagery is striking, Kelly. Congratulations on your well deserved podium win.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/23/2023 4:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind congrats :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/7/2023 12:35:00 AM

Coming back to Congratulate you on your win my dear poet friend, Kelly! We both did it! Thanks again for sharing. God bless you always and your writings.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/18/2023 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind congrats, Len :)

Suzette Richards

Date: 5/6/2023 10:31:00 PM

Congratulations, Kelly, on your 2nd place win in my GRAFFITI contest with this stylised graffiti that fades from the wall. Suzette

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/16/2023 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Suzette... The contest theme was an interesting one to write about. I enjoyed the challenge :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2023 7:19:00 PM

So clever, your imagery! Congratulations, Kelly!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/14/2023 6:14:00 PM

Thank you for the kind congrats, Kim :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/6/2023 12:43:00 PM

Here then, now gone. Cleverly written Kelly. Congratulations on your win! :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/10/2023 3:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/6/2023 10:48:00 AM

- ... skillful, Kelly :) - Congratulations :) - hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/9/2023 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/5/2023 5:36:00 PM

This is a powerful poem. Well written and thought provoking ! :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/17/2023 4:14:00 PM

Thank you for reading, Heidi :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2023 2:21:00 PM

Oh!! I am wondering was it a true wrecking ball or someone doing more than just graffiti on the wall? I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/15/2023 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Sara ... In this poem, I wanted to send a message about leaving a lasting impression... Why leave only graffiti when you can knock down the wall? :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2023 3:39:00 PM

Your clever lines made me think of Banksy and his grafitti being vandalised hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/12/2023 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Jan ... Sending hugs your way :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2023 8:25:00 AM

A creative write. Have a fun day writing away................

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/7/2023 3:32:00 PM

Thank you for reading, Paula :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/30/2023 5:25:00 AM

Brilliant write for the contest my dear poet friend Kelly. I'm also thinking to join but no idea yet. I love what you did on the form, the image and I love the sweet ending. Good luck and best wishes in the contest my dear poet friend although your entry is already a winner in my book. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/30/2023 4:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, as always ... Hugs :)