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I Was Here

Graffiti          fades          from          the          wall,
            Alike              the           alley        after          dark.
    "I                  was          here!",     screams      the
        Wrecking         ball,        leaving          your      mark.

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Sotto Poet

May 7, 2023 at 11:56 AM

Your imagery is striking, Kelly. Congratulations on your well deserved podium win.

Kelly Deschler

September 23, 2023 at 4:48 PM

Thank you so much for your kind congrats :)

Len Gasun

May 7, 2023 at 12:35 AM

Coming back to Congratulate you on your win my dear poet friend, Kelly! We both did it! Thanks again for sharing. God bless you always and your writings.

Kelly Deschler

September 18, 2023 at 4:23 PM

Thank you so much for your kind congrats, Len :)

Suzette Richards

May 6, 2023 at 10:31 PM

Congratulations, Kelly, on your 2nd place win in my GRAFFITI contest with this stylised graffiti that fades from the wall. Suzette

Kelly Deschler

September 16, 2023 at 10:08 AM

Thank you so much, Suzette... The contest theme was an interesting one to write about. I enjoyed the challenge :)

Kim Rodrigues

May 6, 2023 at 7:19 PM

So clever, your imagery! Congratulations, Kelly!

Kelly Deschler

September 14, 2023 at 6:14 PM

Thank you for the kind congrats, Kim :)

Linda Alice Fowler

May 6, 2023 at 12:43 PM

Here then, now gone. Cleverly written Kelly. Congratulations on your win! :)

Kelly Deschler

September 10, 2023 at 3:55 PM

Thank you so much, Linda :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 6, 2023 at 10:48 AM

- ... skillful, Kelly :) - Congratulations :) - hugs

Kelly Deschler

September 9, 2023 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

May 5, 2023 at 5:36 PM

This is a powerful poem. Well written and thought provoking ! :)

Kelly Deschler

August 17, 2023 at 4:14 PM

Thank you for reading, Heidi :)

Sara Kendrick

May 2, 2023 at 2:21 PM

Oh!! I am wondering was it a true wrecking ball or someone doing more than just graffiti on the wall? I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kelly Deschler

August 15, 2023 at 2:02 PM

Thank you, Sara ... In this poem, I wanted to send a message about leaving a lasting impression... Why leave only graffiti when you can knock down the wall? :)

Jan Allison

May 1, 2023 at 3:39 PM

Your clever lines made me think of Banksy and his grafitti being vandalised hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler

August 12, 2023 at 4:01 PM

Thank you, Jan ... Sending hugs your way :)

Paula Goldsmith

May 1, 2023 at 8:25 AM

A creative write. Have a fun day writing away................

Kelly Deschler

August 7, 2023 at 3:32 PM

Thank you for reading, Paula :)

Len Gasun

April 30, 2023 at 5:25 AM

Brilliant write for the contest my dear poet friend Kelly. I'm also thinking to join but no idea yet. I love what you did on the form, the image and I love the sweet ending. Good luck and best wishes in the contest my dear poet friend although your entry is already a winner in my book. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler

July 30, 2023 at 4:16 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, as always ... Hugs :)

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