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I Was Born

Let me count the days since spring And with jays and canaries sing The moment of birth. I was born At the bud of the young ram's horn Fiery as a Mars in his van of war O I love to play the cliffs and scar And dream beneath the moon. I Was born to laugh in tigers' eye. Yet on the day the calender shall count Twenty eight sunrise and no more The peaks the eagle use to mount Will call my name, no more, no more For each birthday now I hesitate Contrite to die, and will not celebrate The hurrying of my soul to the door I cried too when I entered here before. Therefore the song you hear when now I sing, is an old lament from lovers' loss The sun slants her shadows cross the bough I face northwards in the growing moss All birds fly north again, you know And yet before me the white snow The dimming light and horizon far Before ever I cross the sultry bar. I was born chasing moonbeams 'cross the sky O I was born a man and so to die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/30/2009 1:24:00 AM
This is beautifully written and it flows seamlessly and I thank you for the comments you have given me, you are so supportive, and that is a priceless quality, Love Aleera
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:28:00 PM
a wonderful write describing the thoughts and feelings of age we all come to a certain age no particular number that we see things that we have missed before,, though each definite year may be different for each individual we all arrive there at some point with profound feelings,,,Thank you for the comment you left behind after reading my poetry,,,blessings..cecil
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:23:00 PM
This poem is so nicely put David. Thank you so much for your review on my latest write, it allowed me to discover yours and to feel someone's care:) I love the rhymes and the whole picture that you have painted so gracefully. Take care and Salam (peace)
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:40:00 AM
Hello David.... wonderful expression for the turning of a year and the turning of a life... excellent writing my friend ! thank you so much for your comment
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Date: 3/27/2009 7:05:00 AM
Wow! What awesome images beautifully expressed. I love the rhyme of this one too. Perfect ending,very emotional and dreamy. Truly enjoyed this lovely write! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 3/27/2009 7:02:00 AM
Wow! Full of awesome images that make your spirit sing! Truly enjoyed the rhyme of this beautiful write. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:30:00 AM
wistful, really fell into the rythym of this thoughtful poem, lots of fun! Jim
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Date: 3/27/2009 4:41:00 AM
Wonderful writing again..the lamenting in the piece shines through...nicley chosen words to evoke images..
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Date: 3/27/2009 4:39:00 AM
Wow once again. You most definitely leave behind an amazing legacy of written words which will be a gift to treasure. A master poet you are. Happy birthday new friend, and many, many more. Love those last two lines ending a brilliant write so perfectly. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/27/2009 1:29:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments David.Rgds Brian
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