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I Wanted To Write

I wanted to write about wind, but my paper blew away. I wanted to write about rain, but it's a bright sunshine day. Thoughts trickle like water from a fountain, I cannot catch the perfect thought to begin. I wanted to write about you, but you didn't want to stay. I wanted to write about the river, but it was all dry I wanted to write about the clouds, but none are in the sky Thoughts coming and going like lovers in my bed Trying to reach deep inside of this empty head I wanted to write about your smile, but you only cry I wanted to write about love, but I feel empty. I wanted to write about lust, but it does nothing for me. Nothing triggers an extreme flavor, There is no taste my tongue wants to savor. I wanted to write about light, but it is darkness I see. I wanted to write about peace, but we are at war I wanted to write about dreams, but you snore Nothing too fancy, nothing to deep Got to get it all out before I sleep I wanted to write about family, but you walked out the door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/10/2015 7:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, we all have our stepping stones that are slippery and makes as fall
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Date: 9/4/2014 12:27:00 PM
That is so strange you both didn't write anything and I still loved it.
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Date: 7/28/2014 10:12:00 PM
When I am seeing double, I come here, and then I dont feel so bad! Great poem, I wanted to write something along these lines, but I am seeing double!
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Date: 7/29/2014 8:56:00 AM
Haha....oooh double vision... Don't get run over by a bus...sugar
Date: 7/26/2014 3:33:00 PM
I believe the but's did not prevent you two from writing an interesting poem. Well done you two.... Robert.
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Date: 7/27/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Robert.. I was having trouble figuring out what to write about and Cas started this...It sure did work because the flood gates opened....cheers Tim
Date: 7/24/2014 4:35:00 PM
I guess CT U R SOL--lol--just kidding, I liked this piece, I must read more of your work.
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:26:00 PM
Yes we are... Stopping Over Later :) ... hope you have wine :)
Date: 7/24/2014 3:45:00 PM
Hey you two. Great write...It was dreamy...and then you lost me on snore! ;) The magic somehow went up in smoke! Other than that...great write. We all know the feeling.
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Date: 7/24/2014 3:51:00 PM
lol...couldn't dream if she couldn't sleep
Date: 7/24/2014 2:54:00 PM
This is very deep with complete contrasts in the lines. the final line is the killer for me so so sad, Hugs to you both great to have you back together again. I'm missing Darren hope hes around again soon. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan...We just wrote it on the fly..I think it turned out well...hugs Tim

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