I Wanted To Write

I wanted to write about wind, but my paper blew away. 
I wanted to write about rain, but it's a bright sunshine day. 
Thoughts trickle like water from a fountain, 
I cannot catch the perfect thought to begin. 
I wanted to write about you, but you didn't want to stay. 

I wanted to write about the river, but it was all dry 
I wanted to write about the clouds, but none are in the sky 
Thoughts coming and going like lovers in my bed 
Trying to reach deep inside of this empty head 
I wanted to write about your smile, but you only cry 

I wanted to write about love, but I feel empty. 
I wanted to write about lust, but it does nothing for me. 
Nothing triggers an extreme flavor, 
There is no taste my tongue wants to savor. 
I wanted to write about light, but it is darkness I see. 

I wanted to write about peace, but we are at war
I wanted to write about dreams, but you snore
Nothing too fancy, nothing to deep
Got to get it all out before I sleep
I wanted to write about family, but you walked out the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, we all have our stepping stones that are slippery and makes as fall
Yvonne Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 12:27 PM
That is so strange you both didn't write anything and I still loved it.
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 10:12 PM
When I am seeing double, I come here, and then I dont feel so bad! Great poem, I wanted to write something along these lines, but I am seeing double!
Duet Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Haha....oooh double vision... Don't get run over by a bus...sugar
Nehls Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 3:33 PM
I believe the but's did not prevent you two from writing an interesting poem. Well done you two.... Robert.
Duet Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Robert.. I was having trouble figuring out what to write about and Cas started this...It sure did work because the flood gates opened....cheers Tim
Curtis Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 4:35 PM
I guess CT U R SOL--lol--just kidding, I liked this piece, I must read more of your work.
Duet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Yes we are... Stopping Over Later :) ... hope you have wine :)
Manassian Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Hey you two. Great write...It was dreamy...and then you lost me on snore! ;) The magic somehow went up in smoke! Other than that...great write. We all know the feeling.
Duet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 3:51 PM
lol...couldn't dream if she couldn't sleep
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:54 PM
This is very deep with complete contrasts in the lines. the final line is the killer for me so so sad, Hugs to you both great to have you back together again. I'm missing Darren hope hes around again soon. hugs Jan xx
Duet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Jan...We just wrote it on the fly..I think it turned out well...hugs Tim
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