Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

I Wanted More

She has a passion for life; she is exuberant about everything.
I doubted this and started to dislike her before I had met her.
Too many people talked about how excited she was.
No one is this enthusiastic all the time.

Then I met her.
She is radiant like a light bulb; she glows on you.
I was the recipient of the glow, and I loved it.
I loved her!

I wanted more.
I followed her around the party that first night
Never wanting to let her go.
She was excited about everything, and me.

That was the key.
That is why she was a pied piper, 
we all wanted a piece of her
Luckily she exuded enough energy for all of us.

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L Milton Hankins November 7, 2021 at 7:47 PM Sorry, but I tend to hate people like this! Their joy and exuberance can be totally overwhelming, and they can shed so much light I was to live the rest of my life in the dark. Is there something wrong with me???? Caren Krutsinger November 8, 2021 at 8:35 PM Yes apparently there is, but this is the first crack I have found in your likeability armor so I think you are going to be okay.