Jan Allison Poet Personification

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I WAS CHALLENGED BY TIM SMITH TO WRITE THIS POEM:-)

I Want You Now

Just one look at you and my pupils dilate 
I caress you with my fingertips and stroke you gently
I hold you in my hands and undress you slowly
I lick my lips and wish you were in my mouth
You arouse me with your scintillating scent 
Dark, rich and smooth as silk
Oh how I want you
Simply cannot fight off this desire any longer
I need you urgently
Guess I better eat my bar of plain chocolate

Jan Allison
21st August 2014

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Yasmin Artisticbutterfly33 Fekri August 23, 2014 at 5:39 PM hahahah loved it !! Jan Allison August 23, 2014 at 5:42 PM I did a few personification poems the other day - they were fun! Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 3:50 AM Hahaha Sweet Jan..:) sultry way of eating chocolate huh..:D Weee!! Love it;) Jan Allison August 22, 2014 at 4:25 AM thanks Olive I can thank Tim for this write:-) Hugs jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell August 21, 2014 at 5:15 PM Are you that is all you want to eat? haha. Don't fool me. Good one, Jan lol Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 5:19 PM I was challenged by Tim to write a personification poem about chocolate - this is the best I could come up with LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser August 21, 2014 at 4:11 PM Oh my! many a time I have said that. Sadly I put on weight. Now if I'd lived it the way people read the title, yep, I'd have lost weight ;) loved it Jan xx Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 4:26 PM LOL James you also need to read my poem 'you turn me on every day' lol Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 21, 2014 at 3:49 PM oh my that is yummy. I love chocolate! please share!! Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 3:52 PM Tim is responsible for challenging me to write this:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Aiyah Torres August 21, 2014 at 2:59 PM wohoooo!!!! .it's gettin' hot in here.... haha... very well done.. I almost lick my tongue... Superb as always, Jan.. missed your cuteness and charm.. :") Love it!! ^_^ Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 3:01 PM Blame Tim Smith .... i do:-) ... he read my poem called 'You turn me on every day' and challenged me to write a poem about chocolate lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin August 21, 2014 at 1:49 PM Yummy! Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 1:51 PM I can blame Tim for this write - he challenged me lol Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 1:25 PM Scrumptious and delightful Jan......hugs Tim Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 1:49 PM ooh I bought some snickers yesterday they r cheaper than the Reeces and more readily available locally:-) I remember when they were called marathons originally :-( Hugs Jan xxx Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 1:37 PM I have a snickers bar every night at break...lol Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 1:34 PM I've still got one plain choc Reese's Peanut Butter Cup in the fridge - i may succumb to desire now LOL... am loathe to eat it as it will be a few weeks before I get into the city again LOL hugs jan xxx Tim Smith August 21, 2014 at 1:29 PM Mouthwatering Jan ....mmmm...I need a bite :) Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 1:26 PM I hope I rose to the challenge you set Tim:-) Hugs jan xxx