I Want You, Lol

I want you with the force of the Trojan army —
                                                 sweet spot of the horse

8/24/2020
Bobby May’s Flirt with me poetry contest
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Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Highly flirtatious line:-) Congratulations on your win dear Kim mam.. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Deepa! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:01 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:18 AM
Well, interesting foreplay...I'm sure, nice, Kim, my compliments on your win, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Meant to be funny :)
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Wow!!,Kim , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 9:50 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:34 PM
as long as you realize this makes reference to a brand of condoms... otherwise you may be in for more than you bargained for ~
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:49 PM
LOL...I didn’t miss that point either,
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Congratulations on your placement Kim, good job!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, Bobby.
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Sounds like a 'coming-out' party to me! (And I don't meant LBGTQ either!). lol. Potent monoku, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:37 PM
LOL...no closet intended. LOL
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:17 AM
... yes, really strong ... :))) - Good luck in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:40 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! :)
Koplin Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:17 AM
Now that's a strong flirt, wow! Great Job!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Callus Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:13 AM
Flirting with a Trojan horse can be effective yet dangerous, Kim! Good luck :) Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:26 AM
For sure! Thank you, Paul!
Fowler Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 5:11 AM
So vividly expressed. I had a chuckle. Thanks Kim and good luck!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:14 AM
This one made me laugh and I haven't laughed in awhile. Thanks bunches for that. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:25 AM
So glad, Judy! :)
Watt Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 8:33 PM
A trojan horse of a poem, so clever Kim! And isn't it great to see a Bobby May contest again? Woohoo!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Yes, it is. Thank you, John!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 7:44 PM
This is majestically melodic in such brevity! Wow!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 7:51 PM
LOL...thanks!
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