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I Want You, Lol

I want you with the force of the Trojan army — sweet spot of the horse 8/24/2020 Bobby May’s Flirt with me poetry contest

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 6:20:00 AM

Highly flirtatious line:-) Congratulations on your win dear Kim mam.. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you, Deepa! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:01:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you, sweet lady! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 1:18:00 AM

Well, interesting foreplay...I'm sure, nice, Kim, my compliments on your win, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2020 7:59:00 AM

Meant to be funny :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:31:00 PM

Wow!!,Kim , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 9:50:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 4:34:00 PM

as long as you realize this makes reference to a brand of condoms... otherwise you may be in for more than you bargained for ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 4:49:00 PM

LOL...I didn’t miss that point either,

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Kim, good job!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Bobby.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/25/2020 2:20:00 PM

Sounds like a 'coming-out' party to me! (And I don't meant LBGTQ either!). lol. Potent monoku, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 3:37:00 PM

LOL...no closet intended. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 7:17:00 AM

... yes, really strong ... :))) - Good luck in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 9:40:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise! :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/25/2020 6:17:00 AM

Now that's a strong flirt, wow! Great Job!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank you, Mark! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2020 6:13:00 AM

Flirting with a Trojan horse can be effective yet dangerous, Kim! Good luck :) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 6:26:00 AM

For sure! Thank you, Paul!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/25/2020 5:11:00 AM

So vividly expressed. I had a chuckle. Thanks Kim and good luck!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thank you, Linda!

Judy Ball

Date: 8/25/2020 3:14:00 AM

This one made me laugh and I haven't laughed in awhile. Thanks bunches for that. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 6:25:00 AM

So glad, Judy! :)

John Watt

Date: 8/24/2020 8:33:00 PM

A trojan horse of a poem, so clever Kim! And isn't it great to see a Bobby May contest again? Woohoo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2020 6:24:00 AM

Yes, it is. Thank you, John!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/24/2020 7:44:00 PM

This is majestically melodic in such brevity! Wow!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2020 7:51:00 PM

LOL...thanks!