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I Want You

I want you
the spark of your eyes
overshadows the neon lights

I seek you
everything that you are
the center of your being

I adore you
I need you
I love you

Where I am now
the wind kills
tongue turns small together

I want you
a constant gallop of hunger
mounted by need

My shadow is blurring
the evening fire going out
I'm losing myself too

I want you
until you are here
I smell flowers with no aroma...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/27/2013 12:10:00 AM
mmm Yes! Sandyivy
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Date: 8/26/2013 3:47:00 AM
Very strong lines...beautiful
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/26/2013 4:03:00 AM
Hi Eileen, Thanks for the wonderful comments and visiting today.. Ken
Date: 8/15/2013 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for visiting again pretty lady..:-) Yours, Ken....
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Date: 8/15/2013 8:38:00 PM
again! :-) PD
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Date: 8/4/2013 6:04:00 PM
Kenneth, well! well! Love the poem, good things come to those who wait... always~ Linda
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/4/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Linda Paloma...So true as patience is a virtue...Good things do come to those who wait.... Yours, Ken..
Date: 8/4/2013 4:39:00 PM
Romantic lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading them this evening..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/4/2013 5:45:00 PM
than you Sara,,,Enjoyed reading from you as well.. Ken

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