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- I Want You -

~ you smell so delicious and taste so sweet on my lips - my lollipop ~






25/08/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Flirt With Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May
17 syllables
1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fleming Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 11:10 AM
I am not surprised in the least with the 1st place finish -- very well deserved! When you are writing at your best, Anne-Lise, there is such a simple and charming elegance about it all...this is a perfect example. Great writing -- impressed! My very best regards! :) john
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 11:25 AM
... Woow ... thank you very much , John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 8:37 AM
What a swirl ...
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 2:33 AM
- Thanks, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations Anne-Lise; a pleasure to return with applause:) Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 2:32 AM
- Thank you very much for the visit and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flaherty Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 12:11 PM
A poem for desert A sweet treat
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 2:33 AM
- Thanks Christopher, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:17 AM
Nice turn and twist ...
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:05 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:02 PM
Delightful! Congratulations on your top win, Anne-Lise. :=)
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:04 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Lollipop:-) Awesome line..dear Anne mam.. Congratulations on your top win. Take care.Much love:-)
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:04 AM
- Thank you very much Deepa, for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:04 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest, Anne-Lise!!
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:03 AM
- Thank you very much Newton, for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:03 AM
- Rama, thank you very much for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Savory sugary words, Anne-Lise, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:02 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:02 AM
- Thank you very much Eve, for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Nice job with a sweet line, SS. Congrats on your win ~ John
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:26 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sunshine. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your placement Anne-Lise, this was GREAT my sweet lollipop, lol
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 10:59 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list ... a fun contest, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Sweet is the taste! Lovely is your craft! Good to see you, Anne-Lise! and a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry! Warmest wishes and regards.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:16 AM
- Thanks Besma, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 9:45 AM
ahem... hahahaha.... now be careful with too many lollipops... Bobby will love this one!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:15 AM
- Thanks S.O., I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
DiMino Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:17 AM
For sure, who cannot like a lollipop?! Best of luck with your entry.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:15 AM
- Thanks Joe, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Delectable one-liner, Anne-Lise! Janice
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:15 AM
- Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:31 PM
Beautiful entry, great imagery. Good luck my friend
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:10 AM
- Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Beautiful picture:) and poem kelli
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:10 AM
- Thanks Kelli, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:19 PM
awesome. I am noticing this LOL. hmmm, maybe I need to change my title???
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:09 AM
- Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Absolutely De-luscious, Anne-Lise! gl in the contest:) Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:09 AM
- Thanks Paul, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Deliciously romantic, Anne-Lise. Clever write.
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:09 AM
- Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Love it! Candy sweet!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:08 AM
- Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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