Eileen Manassian Poet Blank verse

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I Want To Skinny Dip

I want to skinny dip in pools of your eyes
And dry myself on lashes bordering there
I want to slide on lush plush of your lips
Then fall asleep on pillowed warmth of cheek
I want to reach the hollow of your chest
And camp above the rumbling of your heart 
I want to flirt with fingers of your hand
Then cloistered be, wrapped safe inside your palm
I want to enter world of waiting mouth
Explore and ride the wet waves of your tongue
I want to dance along what makes you man
And tease and please and swirl around and round
I want to course through rapids of your veins  
And then set fire to sanctum of your heart
I want to glide and dip in every breath
And sail the glorious sea of dreams and thoughts
I want all this and then I want much more,
For, darling, you're the one whom I adore

Eileen Manassian

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Jim Joyce January 31, 2015 at 11:46 AM wow this is really nice...very descriptive..the images are very clear ..

Robert Ludden January 29, 2015 at 9:02 PM I'm ready

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2015 at 6:34 PM I really loved the amazing metaphors in this one, Eileen. So interesting and enjoyable to read. What a very good love poem this was. Fresh and creative!! a 7 Eileen Manassian January 27, 2015 at 12:39 AM Thanks, Andrea...good to have you visit.

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2015 at 5:51 PM Hi Eileen, I commented on this one but for some reason I see it didn't post. I had said I enjoy skinny dipping and this one takes Skinny dipping to the Ooh la la level. Eileen Manassian January 27, 2015 at 12:41 AM :) I was wondering what went wrong. It's not like you not to read my work. I don't feel complete unless I see your face here on my page, Richard. You know that....I'm so glad I asked you about it, so you could explain or else...I'd just be a grumpy girl. Hugs...Ooh la la makes me fly

Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 4:24 PM I just realized how much fun skinny dipping could be! You bathe in enchanted waters of passion and seduction where love spells are impossible to counter or resist. You leave us breathless! hugs // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 26, 2015 at 9:56 AM allow me to say it first that you look stunning in your new avatar. Keep it for at least a week."I want to course through rapids of your veins ""a rich, voluptuous cascade of words as usual another great write Wondera.Love>rajat Eileen Manassian January 26, 2015 at 1:38 PM I'm glad you like the avatar...I was JUST going to change it because I though it isn't so nice. If I do...don't be upset. I'm a horrible perfectionist...Thanks for the compliment, though. A voluptuous cascade of words is a lovely way to describe this write. I'm very touched and impressed. Thanks, my dear.

David Meade January 26, 2015 at 8:44 AM I always hate to post after Justin . . . he is awesome. As elegant as his words flow yours soar with beauty and love. The fire of this passionate write burns away the dross and purifies the heart of love. Glorious is the sea of dreams and thoughts . . . here is where love and light dance! Outstanding Little One. 7 fav Eileen Manassian January 26, 2015 at 1:44 PM Justin writes from the heart...with no filters. I appreciate the honesty there... Everyone has his/her signature style of writing and expression. I love having you visit my work and leave your own comments. :) It makes me happy. This comment of yours is sweet and gracious...I Love it. My heart thanks you....Hugs

Justin Bordner January 25, 2015 at 9:02 PM My wilderness is where your dreams may undress...my arms, the security that quells your heart alarms...my gentle grips, the source from which your passion gallops...every man needs to have the extra touch to become the fantasy of true adoration Eileen. "I want to flirt with every finger of your hand...set fire to the sanctum of your heart..." HOT! You will never stop pushing your man to more greatness! J.A.B. Eileen Manassian January 26, 2015 at 1:26 AM Has the Eagle found time from his soaring to come down and visit?? ;) Your posts make the mundane glorious and superb, my dear. Here I am in bed correcting final exams...and I can for a wile forget it all and just soar along with you. :) Justin...thank you for being so good to me. You know how I need encouragement and the epic in my life. You provide me with that and more. I'm glad I was able to heat your wings and flight with this write of mine. Your praise is deliciously sweet...a real treat...that makes me complete! ;)

Shane Cooper January 25, 2015 at 6:35 PM fantastic write, such depth of passion. This poem is an expression of true love. It is so beautiful words fail. i will put into my favourites, it has really touched my heart. Thank you. love Shane xxx Eileen Manassian January 26, 2015 at 1:23 AM She certainly is, Shane. I'll be by to visit you both soon. Shane Cooper January 26, 2015 at 1:20 AM Not sure about how great a person I am but Jan certainly is. She has co written three poems with me. I never expected some one with so much talent to want to do something like that with me. She wears her heart on her sleeve but has time for every one.A wonderful friend. Eileen Manassian January 26, 2015 at 12:43 AM :) Thank you, Shane....I'm a very intense person...That can be a bad thing as I feel pain intensely as well. :( On the plus side...the passion and romance...and sometimes just a glorious day with the sunlight filtering through the trees can bring me to an all time high! :) I'm learning to accept who I am and go with the flow... ;) This is a first time visit from you. Hope to get better acquainted. Any friend of Jan's has got to be a great person. :)

Tim Smith January 25, 2015 at 4:26 PM Wow Eileen...how could he resist...hugs Tim Eileen Manassian January 25, 2015 at 5:20 PM :) How, indeed! Thanks for dropping by, Tim.

Timothy Emmons January 25, 2015 at 4:24 PM Love and passion, unbridled, not restraints. Just exactly how it's supposed to be. You have captured these feelings spot on. I enjoyed reading your poem Eileen Manassian January 25, 2015 at 5:21 PM Passion should never be bridled! ;) It should gallop free....without restraints. At least that's the case in poetry! :) Thanks for stopping by...

Jack Ellison January 25, 2015 at 4:21 PM Sure got me with your title! LOL And it didn't disappoint... YIKESERS!!! Love and joy, Kenny xxx Jack Ellison January 25, 2015 at 5:52 PM Having a problem posting an image. What's the sequence? Does it have be URL from Google Images file or something like that" HELP! Eileen Manassian January 25, 2015 at 5:22 PM Kenny....glad you liked the title...Had some nice photos of skinny dipping, but TPS got those strict rules and all...so, this is the best I could do on pics, but the words??? Well, let those sizzle. Will be by to visit soon. Hugs