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I Want To Dream

I want to dream a dream
I want to make a castle 
in the air........

I want to have a hot kiss 
on your forbidden rosy lips
I want to take a hot coffee
in a downtown restaurant 
of Toronto with you......

I want to walk side by side 
with you in the Woodbine  beach
I want to be lost with you
in an unknown destination.....

I have right to dream 
to make a castle in the air.....

Copyright © Mohammad Abedin | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/30/2014 4:33:00 PM Mohammad, Congratulations, on your win... Nice First Date entry..... xox~ LINDA Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/24/2014 8:15:00 AM HOT! congrats on your win..keep dreaming..and writing. BG Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/23/2014 10:05:00 PM Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, mohammad Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/22/2014 10:11:00 AM Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, mohammad Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2014 7:27:00 AM - Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, MOHAMMAD ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 3/22/2014 7:19:00 AM Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend Mohammad. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 3/16/2014 6:43:00 AM So romantic! Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/16/2014 5:53:00 AM Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , mohammad Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 3/15/2014 9:32:00 PM congrats on win hugs Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/15/2014 2:18:00 PM Mohammad, Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/15/2014 1:33:00 PM Mohammad, You did not follow the title rule. However, I enjoyed the poem.... And placed it with honors... CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. if it has one :) Always and Forever ~LINDA Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2014 7:28:00 AM - Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Mohammad. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/15/2014 5:38:00 AM Congrats on the fine win in the contest Impress me IV, mohammad Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/14/2014 7:11:00 PM Mohammad, Congrats on Giorgio's contest... SKAT Login to Reply

Tiaua M Ioane Date: 3/7/2014 3:51:00 AM Greetings Mohammad, I love the light-heartedness of your work, from a castle to a restaurant, beach and then a unknown destination, makes one so exhausted. Keep it up. Tiaua Login to Reply