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I Want To Be Yours

I want to be.... Your rose without a single thorn, Your rainbow without a summer storm, Your oyster, which contains a pearl, Yet nobody is perfect, and I'm just a girl, I promise I will do my very best, To love you better than all the rest. I want to be.... One half of our unbroken heart, Your new beginning for love to start, Your laughter that never ends, Your arrow that Cupid sends, The key that unlocks your heart, The one with whom you never part. I want to be.... Your sunshine without a cloudy day, Your moonlight there to light your way, Your music to the lyrics of a song, A love you've longed for, for so long, Your inspiration I want to be, For your words of divine poetry. Written by: Kelly Deschler The Sweetest Touches of Verse Contest (Iambic Tetrameter)

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/22/2016 11:59:00 AM

This flows along so nicely in iambic pentameter. Hope your romantic liaisons flow along as nicely. Congrats. daver

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/5/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Daver. Your kind comments are much appreciated... I haven't had this much luck with love, but I hope that changes one day soon :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 11:18:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my comment

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/8/2016 8:38:00 AM

As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Kelly on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/17/2016 9:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Hans. I really appreciate you stopping by :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/6/2016 2:38:00 PM

Beautifully written, Kelly. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/13/2016 11:09:00 PM

I appreciate your kind congrats, Sandra. All I can say is thank you :)

Skat A

Date: 2/6/2016 6:17:00 AM

KELLY, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/11/2016 9:58:00 PM

Thanks, Skat. I appreciate you stopping by :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/6/2016 3:44:00 AM

Hi Kelly. Congrats for your beautiful piece, and #2 placement in the contest!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/11/2016 9:51:00 PM

Hi Teddy, thank you for the kind congrats and comments :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 2:13:00 AM

Kelly,, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/10/2016 11:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Linda :) Hope that you enjoy the rest of your week!

Joseph May

Date: 11/30/2014 6:48:00 PM

This is a gem of a write Kelly....Congrats on your win

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/4/2014 11:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for your nice comments, Joseph!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 12:43:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats kelly:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/4/2014 2:07:00 AM

Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Jan. Hugs :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/30/2014 7:49:00 AM

Kelly this is such a sweet romantic dear! Congrats on a much deserved win!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/3/2014 2:06:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words, Dr. Upma! I don't write a lot of romantic poetry. I should try to do more, because this poem was a joy to write!

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:37:00 AM

KELLY. Congratulation, enjoy your win. ~SKAT~

Paul Callus

Date: 10/14/2014 9:55:00 AM

How lovely and romantic, Kelly! Your words are expressed with love and sincerity. Congratulations on your win. // paul

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate them very much, Paul!

Gautami Phookan

Date: 10/13/2014 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts, a very nice poem indeed! Congrats Kelly on your win and thank you so much for this poem.. love

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 1:30:00 AM

You're very welcome, Gautami. Thank you for your nice comments. I appreciate you placing me amongst so many talented poets in your contest! :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/13/2014 12:48:00 PM

So pure and charming. Congratulations.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 1:21:00 AM

Thank you for your nice comments, Maurice. I appreciate it!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2014 12:29:00 PM

so sweet and full of romance many congrats Kelly its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 1:14:00 AM

Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Jan! Hugs :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/13/2014 11:56:00 AM

Congrats on another win, Kelly

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 1:02:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Ram!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/13/2014 10:23:00 AM

I was hooked from line one...LOVE the way you introduce all three verses with 'I want to be'....Brilliant and elegant poem. Congratulations Kelly - Tim

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/17/2014 12:53:00 AM

Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats. It really meant so much to me, Tim!

Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 4:17:00 PM

Kelly This is so sweet and full of romance. I can feel the emotion flowing from your heart onto the paper. Nice job Thanks for the fantastic comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions poem.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/8/2013 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations Kelly on your well-deserved win. cheers!! so beautiful poem :)

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 9/5/2013 9:16:00 AM

I am so happy that your poem placed this well! First place is always a feat of skill. It is so nice to have people to rejoice with is it not? Congratulations on the superb win of your pretty and brilliant poem!