Shirley Long Poet Rhyme

I Want My Alone Time

I want my alone time, just you and I
dont care if no one even come by.
I want my alone time the way it used to be,
noone but you and me. 

I want my alone time without any interruptions,
We need no introduction, only you and me, this is
the way I want it to be,

I want my alone time and need it now,
We do not need anyone to show us how.
Just You for Me and Me for You
we both know exactly what to do!

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Jay Loveless May 14, 2012 at 10:30 AM (: I love this and def understand the NEED to be alone, like old times with the one you love.

W. D. Thomas May 10, 2012 at 9:49 AM Wow, don't we all. Thank you for sharing.

Carolyn Oclaire May 4, 2012 at 5:35 PM Love this...we just need that time alone

Anya Chebukina April 20, 2012 at 7:41 PM Awesome! Really enjoyed it.=) Sign, Anya

Don Johnson April 9, 2012 at 6:12 PM typo 4th line... love your verse babe all the time... good one ...

John Loving Iii April 5, 2012 at 8:20 PM okok i'll send out the message right now. leave me alone for the next two hours.

Honestly J.T. April 5, 2012 at 1:58 AM steal away into the night, as two lovers take flight. Love's flame your heart ignites and I must say this a great write. Goodnight- JH

Robert Johnson March 27, 2012 at 3:53 PM Alone together, now aint that nice. A nest to feather, don't you think twice. Just steal away to paridise. Two souls casting their luck with the roll of the dice.

Doris Culverhouse March 27, 2012 at 6:48 AM sounds so nice....haven't had any lately.

Carol Eastman March 24, 2012 at 11:23 AM Sounds like you have kids...LOL No, it was wwell written and your emotions show beautifully.

Don Johnson March 14, 2012 at 11:19 PM great image of the happy two, great sounding be you happy too... orright..

Jim Pemberton March 11, 2012 at 7:28 AM Thanks for your comments and the wonderful poems you write! JP

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2012 at 7:42 PM feeling deep emotion in this write Shirley.. sweet expressions of luv..alone time is precious..luv..

Adrienne Gresham February 28, 2012 at 2:55 PM you hit it right on the head, thanks for posting this. Thanks for reading my poem and the lovely comments

John Loving Iii February 27, 2012 at 4:17 PM this sounds like it belongs to someone.

Chuck Novotny February 26, 2012 at 11:04 AM In a world where "connectedness" seems focused outside of primary relationships, thoughts like this serve to remind that connectedness begins at home. Delightful write! - Chuck

Bl Devnath February 25, 2012 at 12:50 PM All needs like you. This is very sweet time, loved and thanks for your comment, loved, bl

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2012 at 3:07 PM Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

Kash Poet February 24, 2012 at 4:12 AM Very passionate write by you.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your kind comment at my poem.

Maureen Lefanue February 23, 2012 at 5:13 AM Thanks Shirley for your kind comment re my poem. God bless, Maureen

Debra Squyres February 22, 2012 at 5:34 PM I so understand this....I think all couples and individuals need alone time.

James Fraser February 22, 2012 at 2:02 PM I believe we all need to have this moment. Sadly, not all of get this chance to share our time alone. Makes you think Shirley :)

Robert Ball February 22, 2012 at 10:45 AM thanks for your kind comments you poem here is delightful and spurs a memory. very good from a fellow poet to you. keep the juices and the pen flowing it helps a lot of people in different ways, thanks to God this site is here for all of us, God bless bob

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2012 at 8:04 PM Shirley, i need alone time always.. but, being a mother... i can't find the time... everything i do has eye's on it... i want my alone time now!!! ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD

Deck Fitzgerald February 20, 2012 at 2:05 PM Such a lovely read Shirley and when your in love who needs a crowd :) Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx

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