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I Want My Alone Time

I want my alone time, just you and I
dont care if no one even come by.
I want my alone time the way it used to be,
noone but you and me. 

I want my alone time without any interruptions,
We need no introduction, only you and me, this is
the way I want it to be,

I want my alone time and need it now,
We do not need anyone to show us how.
Just You for Me and Me for You
we both know exactly what to do!

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/14/2012 10:30:00 AM

(: I love this and def understand the NEED to be alone, like old times with the one you love.

W. D. Thomas

Date: 5/10/2012 9:49:00 AM

Wow, don't we all. Thank you for sharing.

Carolyn Oclaire

Date: 5/4/2012 5:35:00 PM

Love this...we just need that time alone

Anya Chebukina

Date: 4/20/2012 7:41:00 PM

Awesome! Really enjoyed it.=) Sign, Anya

Don Johnson

Date: 4/9/2012 6:12:00 PM

typo 4th line... love your verse babe all the time... good one ...

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/5/2012 8:20:00 PM

okok i'll send out the message right now. leave me alone for the next two hours.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/5/2012 1:58:00 AM

steal away into the night, as two lovers take flight. Love's flame your heart ignites and I must say this a great write. Goodnight- JH

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/27/2012 3:53:00 PM

Alone together, now aint that nice. A nest to feather, don't you think twice. Just steal away to paridise. Two souls casting their luck with the roll of the dice.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/27/2012 6:48:00 AM

sounds so nice....haven't had any lately.

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/24/2012 11:23:00 AM

Sounds like you have kids...LOL No, it was wwell written and your emotions show beautifully.

Don Johnson

Date: 3/14/2012 11:19:00 PM

great image of the happy two, great sounding be you happy too... orright..

Jim Pemberton

Date: 3/11/2012 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and the wonderful poems you write! JP

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 7:42:00 PM

feeling deep emotion in this write Shirley.. sweet expressions of luv..alone time is precious..luv..

Adrienne Gresham

Date: 2/28/2012 2:55:00 PM

you hit it right on the head, thanks for posting this. Thanks for reading my poem and the lovely comments

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/27/2012 4:17:00 PM

this sounds like it belongs to someone.

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/26/2012 11:04:00 AM

In a world where "connectedness" seems focused outside of primary relationships, thoughts like this serve to remind that connectedness begins at home. Delightful write! - Chuck

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/25/2012 12:50:00 PM

All needs like you. This is very sweet time, loved and thanks for your comment, loved, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2012 3:07:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 4:12:00 AM

Very passionate write by you.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your kind comment at my poem.

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 2/23/2012 5:13:00 AM

Thanks Shirley for your kind comment re my poem. God bless, Maureen

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/22/2012 5:34:00 PM

I so understand this....I think all couples and individuals need alone time.

James Fraser

Date: 2/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

I believe we all need to have this moment. Sadly, not all of get this chance to share our time alone. Makes you think Shirley :)

Robert Ball

Date: 2/22/2012 10:45:00 AM

thanks for your kind comments you poem here is delightful and spurs a memory. very good from a fellow poet to you. keep the juices and the pen flowing it helps a lot of people in different ways, thanks to God this site is here for all of us, God bless bob

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 8:04:00 PM

Shirley, i need alone time always.. but, being a mother... i can't find the time... everything i do has eye's on it... i want my alone time now!!! ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD