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I want to leave raw bite marks All over her tender heart. And I want each small little dint, To hold that perfect dart. And I want her thoughts to hang On all our moments of cure. To remain a cure for all our needs, Our hopes, our crisp, our pure. And I want to leave my voice Wafting through her ears, Swimming through her mind each day, Removing all her fears. And I want her to see, to smell, To taste, to feel brave with me, Every day, for both our minds to join, In our happy, our beauty, our free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/16/2017 12:00:00 PM
Hi Lewis , great write but I am not sure if this is a love story or a horror story ,,,lol your writes required a lot of deep thinking which is cool:))) hugs
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:13:00 PM
Hi Niall. This can be either love or nightmare, its up to you. Cheers

Book: Shattered Sighs