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I Wandered Lonely As a Soul

"I wandered lonely as a cloud - William Wordsworth" I wandered lonely as a soul riven too soon from earthly form. Time to have so cruelly stole by act of duty to perform. One more you made no call for a victim of another's war. A soldier, sailor, or marine; what we have for our country done no one of our age should have seen. Matters naught if we lost or won; I'll wander lonely as a soul; Not here, not anywhere, not whole. I did not ask to wander so; in guilt for things that I have done just a regular GI Joe one time a mother's loving son. Oh now! With blood spilt by my hands soaking the soil of foreign lands. Some who fought now live life afraid; we are forever in their debt. So, remember what price they paid happen you see a tired old vet Wandering lonely as a soul; time to have; so cruelly stole.

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Date: 9/20/2022 11:06:00 AM
Terry, this is Fantastic poetry, especially when the implications of the metaphors are taken into consideration. I liked the general atmosphere and the way the writing flowed. The reading experience is delightful. My best wishes for the contest.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/24/2022 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comments
Date: 9/20/2022 10:56:00 AM
Such a sad write. I always feel sad for the senseless loss of young men’s lives in wars. “We are forever in their debt.” SuZ
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/24/2022 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much; it is a theme I often return to.
Date: 9/20/2022 9:12:00 AM
I like this very much, Terry. Fine writing on the contest theme. Maybe you were Wordworth in a previous life, eh?
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/24/2022 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Milton, I enjoy entering the contests it helps me explore new themes and forms

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