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I Wandered Lonely As a Puppet Thru Reno

"I wandered lonely as a cloud" William Wordsworth. I wandered lonely as a puppet thru Reno Like a weathered kite without it's tail My feet take in a casino As I followed that beaten trail O'er the sea of green I splash With a wrinkled dollar in cash I find a table and take in a chair With my three back packs at my side Happy I am amongst the stare Eventhough my lot in life's a low tide Three patrons pinched their noses If only they knew how it goes The dark side of living on the street A constant bobbing thru skid row Where every pocket filled with defeat Twenty four seven, I have nowhere to go Save for a treasure in the thrash I find a half eaten burrito to add to my stash To the other street rats I fear They'll steal my sandal Take my cardboard box and gear And part with my coins from a panhandle I'm used to being knocked to the ground But I can only whimper and not make a sound As I snap out of my nightmare The dealer ask if my money play I look down at my bet and say a prayer Lord, I urge, let this be the day Let the daffodils spread and spread The ball lands on black and I'm seeing red 9/20/2022 I Wandered Lonely As --- Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg 7th place

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Connie Pachecho

Date: 9/26/2022 2:39:00 PM

Writers notes. I used the analogy of puppet and kite, like in both instances my line is pulled by circumstances and certainly like a kite without a tail. The line ... bobbing thru skidroll is consistent with the aforementioned. The last line, sigh, I took my wrinkled dollar to the roulette table and had the choice of betting on red or black. I bet it all on red. The ball landed on black hence the reason I'm seeing red (wordplay).From Wordsworth's highlighted poem-I uses daffodils and o'er.

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 9/24/2022 3:58:00 AM

Connie thank you for this interesting entry. I feel you touch an important issue with your poem. How alone a victim of addiction can feel weather it is gambling, drinking, or other kinds. Thank you for this angle. Congrats on your placement. :-D

Connie Pachecho
Date: 9/24/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thankyou, Natasha.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/20/2022 8:11:00 PM

The sad plight of the lonely homeless Awesome write :)

Connie Pachecho
Date: 9/24/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thankyou, Susan.