I Walked These Walls

Old but not forgotten, sleeping but not gone;
Fragments of a stronghold that battles on
Still weathering storms, though with little defence,
Sparks sadness within - though it makes no sense.
So why does this space stir my soul
With its whispered ancient calls?

They still fly the flag, but this place's pride
Is recorded in the ether of the bits left behind.
My soul speaks belonging, while the walls crumble down
And only the birds find shelter here now.
So why does this feel like coming home,
Like a thousand magnetic pulls?

Ascending the spiral, my spirit feels freed;
Looking down from above, my heart beats, it bleeds
For a once-loved kingdom now left in repose.
Yet within these walls resound beautiful echoes,
For I know each turret, each tower, each stone.
I hear their song. I walked these walls.

Copyright (c) Silverla StMichael 6th July 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Beautifully paced melancholy, Silverla.
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 3:54 AM
Silverla I like this a lot....David
Stmichael Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Thank you!
Vaso Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Hi Silveria, this is such a beautiful write on the past, loved it!
Stmichael Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Thank you!
Platt Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:02 PM
This is good. Could it be that you were part of this place in your past lives? I felt the same when I visited castles in Wales. Well done. Regards, Colin.
Stmichael Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Yes, I have had some memories in dreams etc as well as the actual deja vu. The place this is based on is Rhuddlan Castle, but there are a few of the Welsh castles where I have experienced deja vu. So much history there.
McBride  Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 6:00 PM
i love it, thanks for sharing
Stmichael Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Thank you x
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 5:16 PM
oh.... :O deep compelling heartpulling write.. God bless you.. :)
Stmichael Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 5:53 AM
God bless you too x
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