I Walked The Heath

I walked the heath
and the sun
but revel
in my maker’s glare
do I stall
if this lustrous scene
unfolds unbound
without me
or does it play on
regardless
and I walk this sun
upon this heath
forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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March 15, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Hey Clive…l read this poem a couple of times as it holds interest and is thought provoking! Enjoyed ….Debx
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March 15, 2024 at 8:33 AM
I think the scenes of life will play on regardless of whether we're in them or not, even those scenes we are in will play on in a loop forever, well that's what I think anyway, thanks for reading Deb
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