I Walk Softly

I take my time and walk softly now
To defuse life's briny thorns
Which have been laid across my path
Since such time when I was born.
It makes no sense to stamp my feet
To further enhance my flawed ambition.
To be thought a fool at every turn
Where others mock my trite condition.
So I walk softly now upon the grass
Leaving no harm to time and space
With a vain hope those who follow me
Will find no mark upon this place.
But the danger lies in happenstance
And a wasted life a tad banal
As I fear without some modest gesture,
It will be like I was never here at all.

                   The End

For those who are interested. I will be posting my cartoon 'Bob's Your Uncle' on my homepage. A new one will appear every couple of days or so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/1/2021 3:10:00 AM
Wowzer of a Poem my friend. Best wishes in 2021 Pangie xx
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Date: 11/11/2020 6:40:00 AM
Very provocative and insightful David. Thanks for sharing. :) Linda
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:15:00 PM
Deep thoughts for sure... I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/7/2020 6:34:00 PM
I second Silent's comment below. Much food for thought here, David. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:19:00 AM
Deep poetry David.. who know what fate holds for us..
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David Mchattie
Date: 11/7/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thanks my friend. We should all leave some small mark on this world. Have a great day.
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