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I Wait For You

You'll soon be here It's quiet now, all have gone Last light softens what was too bright before the surf kicks a ball as if to say come play with water teasing my toes I wait here for you one bird curiously inspects my wheels tries to tear a worm away The sky draws purple shawls slowly waving in the evening wind I still wait for you In last fringes of light I need to save myself From floods rising fast in my eyes I give the ball back to the ocean *** July 20, 2017 Copyright © Darren White
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Roper Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Nicely done, Darren, your strength and imagery is beautiful. ~*
Makama Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 12:33 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
R. V. Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Nice, as usual, Darren. A touch of pathos! I enjoyed the read. Ram
White Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Ram, thank you so very much :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 11:25 AM
You are such a gifted writer my dear. I define art as drawing an emotional response, which you do so gracefully with your pen. Hats off to you xomo
White Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 1:37 AM
Thank you mo :) And yes, it is.
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Reads very sad to me Darren. I hope you are not sad.
White Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Don't worry Daniel, it really is first and foremost a poem
Williams Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 6:30 AM
I especially love your last four lines Darren, says it all. Very profound as always....Maria
White Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Maria!
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 12:19 AM
This is why I MUST create words! Ballishous!
White Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:32 AM
LOL, I love your new words :)
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Wave to wave I'm just enjoying your time///waiting along side with you// to be blown in every direction// along with my tide
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate you so much :)
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