I Wait

She puts together a heart of 
hearts that been broke apart 
for so long. Reluctantly it’s 
been so long since I had a 
tender touch. You see it’s been 
too much trust I began to lust 
and fall back into a track that 
got me dazed. Then I became 
amazed as an angel appeared 
at my door step. Comforting 
me as a slept taken in every 
breath I breathed from inside of 
me. Replaced it with a dream of 
dreams that gave me hope. 
That afloat my imagination as I 
wait patient to seek a new 
beginning. From a life full of 
sinning I am left empty. Until 
you appeared to fill my heart 
with plenty…of love. From 
above is an angel that grounds 
me into reality. That one day in 
my mortality love will come. 
Dripping out the sun as I sit 
and wait patient. I wait patient 
for you to appear. Staying near 
my heart no longer apart we 
both take that journey of life. 
Sitting across you as you 
become my wife but until then I 
sit and wait for that day to 
appear. For you are so near to 
the languages to open up the 
key to my heart. Taking it off 
the charts so now you are no 
longer Venus nor I Mars. We 
become a part of one entwined 
unit taking apart the stars in 
the sky. Letting are eyes collide 
till the motion is felt. You see 
when I looked for love you 
help. When I needed that 
passion you were there. Now 
no one can compare to the 
essence you bring from your 
toes to your hair.  You’re the 
queen of ideas the beauty of 
my thoughts. You’re the one 
that clouts my love into a new 
meaning. So I sleep left 
dreaming. Till one day you yes 
you feel the same way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/17/2012 2:14:00 PM
HI ROBERT, STOPPING BY THIS POEM ONCE AGAIN..., congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:48:00 PM
Thanks for the support. Greatly appreciated
Date: 9/15/2012 10:37:00 PM
Robert, a very moving poem.... enjoyed stopping by :-) always~PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:09:00 PM
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