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                       He sat quietly in the incoporeal 
                     thought theater of confusion never listening to 
                   everpresent unsatisfied yet insatisible quivering 
                 thoughtfulls of glowing fantasies intrepid night 
               romances doing the don’ts of life and society
            I can taste you in my dreams   touch you in my
         nonsleep care for your waterfall uncommon 
       in luxury midnite delicious door chime 
     renedevous windcaste fate  meld of mind and 
   soul of flesh and time, one nonapart
 minute embracement  
                                 (and close my eyes)


dave collins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 13, 2015 at 12:38 AM
DAVE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**
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March 6, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations, Dave. GREAT win.
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March 6, 2014 at 3:03 PM
Dave congratulations on your well deserved win. I can see why you placed in this contest. Nicely written - Connie
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March 5, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Congrats on the win!!!
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March 5, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Dave, Congrats on placing at top in contest!!
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March 5, 2014 at 6:55 AM
- Dave, congratulations on your great winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 5, 2014 at 6:33 AM
Creative write Congrats on your win.
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Dave.
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, dave
Davis Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 9:55 PM
Dave This is an intriguing write. Makes the reader think and feel. Nice job
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Interesting lines that you have penned..Sara
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