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I Tumble In the Waves

there's something inside the infrared rise of sun across the span of ocean that stirs within outbursts of mind lash against the sands of time that swallowed you in the tides of yesteryear leaving me to wander alone across the shores of life unguarded from storms i still taste the salty spray in your absence, enraged i walk alone

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John Watt

Date: 3/17/2020 1:13:00 PM

Sandra, I love that you channel your emotions into beautiful poetry. The sufferings and loss you have experienced have been polished into a deep capacity for compassion. Words (or art, in general) diffuse that sharp pain and allow others (readers) to know they are not alone. Bless you in your journey and thank you for allowing us to walk it with you. My hugs and best wishes to you today ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/17/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you so much John.... glad you enjoyed it...hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2019 10:24:00 AM

I love the metaphors in this reflective piece Sandra. When death snatches away a loved one emotions run high. This is so emotive of that pain that expresses itself as anger. Superb insight in your wonderful poem Sandra. : )xoxo

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/13/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Connie...death has stolen so many most of my life, last year i attended 10 funerals...half family, half people close to me.... pain lashes out sometimes.... :) hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 9:47:00 PM

Sometimes we have to muster our courage and stand tall, no matter what comes. Beautifully penned.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/6/2019 2:07:00 PM

i think strength comes in the courage, though distance may be greater than we stand, we still try to stand as tall as we can regardless.... hugs :)

Craig Cornish

Date: 8/4/2019 9:49:00 PM

Girl! When you let it go, it's a great ride!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/5/2019 4:11:00 AM

Thank you Craig my muse was rolling with the tide of life yesterday:) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/4/2019 6:31:00 PM

There is a determination in this poem that says "I am okay, I can face the storms."

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 7:07:00 PM

we all have to face the storms life hands us sometimes... thanks :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/4/2019 4:09:00 PM

You certainly are spending a lot of time walking on the sand near the ocean. Intriguing writes, all of them. :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 5:37:00 PM

one inspirational photo sparked my muse in different directions....the ocean is one of my favorite things to watch, and the sunrise and sunsets are in the list as well... thanks Gershon....Hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/4/2019 3:06:00 PM

The sands of time that swallowed you...well, well, that is very cool!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thank you John....i have to ask my muse where that came from, she is on a sea theme now instead of the mountains...i adore nature though, so love the inspiration within it :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/4/2019 1:36:00 PM

Powerful, Sandra. Love it.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Line :) hugs