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I Try To Try- For Yann Rolland

"i try to try" (for yann rolland)


write in English
rhyme in French

the music
is fantastic

a symphony
that is life



"j'essaye d'essayer" (pour yann rolland)


écrire en anglais
rime en français

la musique
est fantastique

une symphonie
c'est la vie

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Yann Rolland

Date: 10/17/2023 6:46:00 AM

vraiment fantastique inspiration, Jeff, vous êtes doué dans les deux langues, bravo, j'admire le clin d'œil amical merci

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/17/2023 8:44:00 AM

Lol no no no yann. I'm not proficient in any language; even English lol. I simply took some of the French words that I know and found rhymes for them; then wrote around them to make some sort of sense. I am glad you liked it. I truly appreciate that you submit your poems in your language. I wish other poets from other countries would do the same. (PS: I had to use a translator to translate your comment lol) Hugs