I Traveled Far To the Engine of Souls

my great obidance 
as
a train slipping 
of tracks into a manor of faiths 
my dream is the concusion of are dreams not knowing 
the wings of fortune 
a cristal clear disire 
reaping into flamelike arts 
rippels of destanation 
like a huge addiction 
qualety's blemished 
a new stainted letter of the deposite into grace 

feeling how the leaves are shivering 
clouded by emortial savior 
destend to become the quial 
of are justiced parking hit's line 
that he's is smoking daddie's weeds 
on a drifters hook of pray's
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 15, 2026 at 6:47 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 2:12 AM
V.M, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Veerle, wonderful poem. Skat
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