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I Touched As You Laid

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I panicked as you touched and I touched as you laid. I knew no longer I would be afraid. Blushing and sweeping my feet wrapped with yours, hushing and weeping out of love, as we closed the door. Tickles and kisses while sleepy and weary, prickles and listless, my sweetie so cheery. A love so divine lasting throughout all time, as our bodies lay entwined, oh my love, you’re all mine. Sweet whispers from my darling, my lover in the night. Our heat’s flames starving, there’s no other for the delight of my sight. Caution to the wind as you desire my every move, my dear Lawson light my fire, as we sway to our groove. Eager and waiting and hungry for your thirst, you’re my feeder while we’re mating and spunky while submersed. Is it infatuation and lustful or lovely romance? Or imagination while trustful willing to take a chance? Can we continue this affair without hurt or damage? Or is this just a new breeze in the air full of flirt and baggage? I see your eyes as they gaze at my lips, I am free from disguise all these days under the eclipse. I feel the need of passion when lying in your arms, I’d steal the heed of compassion when dying from your charms. I panicked as you touched and I touched as you laid. I knew no longer I would be afraid. Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: May 30, 2016

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Date: 5/30/2016 5:48:00 PM
ohh what a passionate write LuLoo - love the way you started and ended the poem with the same couplet:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:08:00 PM
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Jan :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 2:53:00 PM
Great write, Laura, I truly enjoyed listening great flow and rhyme a 7 +++:)
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:08:00 PM
thank you very much lovely lady Eve :)-luloo
Date: 5/30/2016 1:23:00 PM
Oh, Laura, it was so wonderful to hear you reading this one. WELL DONE. I love also how you began and ended this using the two repeated lines that pull it all together.
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Date: 5/30/2016 2:36:00 PM
thank you Andrea :)-luloo

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