I Told the Sun - For Darren White

I told the sun – for Darren White I told the sun who told the sky who told the clouds and made them cry the rain drops told a bumble bee who told a rose who told a tree the tree then told a butterfly who told a bluebird flying high who told the stars who told the moon Now we all say please get well soon Hoping you feel better soon Darren
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Daniel Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 12:20 AM
This is beautiful, Chris, for a great person:) hope it makes him better:)
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June 26, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so very much Jo. I hope so too.
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June 20, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Chris, all your writings are amazing, its hard to come up with different ways to say that, however this one, well knowing Darren, any poem that on top of being so well written has that much heart in it, is to me not just a beautiful poem, is a GREAT poem! :)
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June 21, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Oh...this poem. :) That'll teach me to read mail before comments. Thanks so much Arthur, I am thrilled you liked this one. Please, be my guest.
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June 17, 2017 at 6:23 AM
WHAT a feelings for a friend! Pray for Darren. Get well soon.
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June 19, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thanks so very much. I am happy you liked this one.
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June 13, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Don't know how I missed this precious poem. Get well, Darren.
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June 14, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Sunlite. I believe he is feeling much better.
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June 13, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Such a sweet write and it has that feeling of hope throughout. Loved it Chris. Hope Darren is feeling better.
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June 13, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thank you so very much Wilma. I hope he is as well.
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June 12, 2017 at 4:13 AM
Good Morning Chris. I for one second your thoughts and words. I found this beautiful. Yes, I hope he is feeling better. The meaning of friendship and blessing shine here in your entry. I hope all is well with you. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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June 12, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa.
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June 11, 2017 at 9:47 PM
=D if you passed this around I'd sign it, lovely sweet and sunny, wonderful write Chris xomo
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June 12, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much Maureen
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June 9, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Best get well card, I never got. Lol! Beautiful poem, Chris. Hope my man, Darren recovers soon. Wonderful poetry that dances w/joy. Love always.
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June 12, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Ah well, you can share it Freddie. : ) Thanks my friend.
Ella Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 4:30 AM
This is a lovely rhyme Chris :) brings a smile!
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June 12, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much Sara.
Williams Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 3:13 AM
What a wonderful little poem for Darren, who I can see absolutely adores it....Maria
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June 12, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much Maria
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June 9, 2017 at 12:43 AM
Aww Chris, THANK YOU! :D HUGS This is such a perfect little poem, imma gonna fave it. It sings and dances and makes me smile and happy.
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June 12, 2017 at 8:09 AM
I am happy you liked it my friend.
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June 8, 2017 at 8:10 PM
That was quite wonderful, Chris!
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June 12, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Kim
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June 8, 2017 at 7:45 PM
ahh, so so cute. and I hope he gets well.I did not hear about this!!!
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June 12, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Andrea
Walker Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Very cute, this perfect get well rhyme :) He will love it !
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June 12, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so very much Lenna
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June 8, 2017 at 6:06 PM
This is great!! I hope Darren feels better soon and enjoys this :)
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June 12, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much Heidi
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June 8, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Beautiful...Darren will love it.
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June 12, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thanks Tim
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June 8, 2017 at 5:44 PM
This is so clever.
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June 12, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thanks Dale
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