Francine Roberts Poet Rhyme

I Thought You Should Know

I hate being sick
Hate it a lot
I hate this cold
This cold I have caught.

When I cough
My lungs feel they'll burst
I hate being sick
This is the worst.

It's my day off
And I want to play
Not sit here coughing
And shivering all day

This cold is annoying
I wish it would go
I hate being sick
I thought you should know.




* I have bronchitus and am feeling sorry for myself

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Michael J. Falotico February 11, 2011 at 2:53 PM Please feel better Francine, and thanks for the sweet comment but its not for a contest, its an example for my Tanka contest.. which by the way thank you for supporting...Michael

Robert Pettit February 10, 2011 at 11:07 PM I hope you feel better soon. This is a decent way to describe it all poetically.