I Thought We Were Happy

I thought we were happy he said.
Because he was happy.
He had given up nothing.
He had his hunting, fishing, and trapping.

His wife had her cooking, cleaning, and housework.
Surely that was more than enough to make her happy.
In the evenings she could sew or tat a doily or something.
He kept all of his friends but resented hers.

When her friends came by he glared them down 
They left quickly, and he acted like he did not know what he did.
It did not take long for them to quit coming.
He was happy about that.

I thought we were happy he said when he found her note.
She had left, unexpectedly, and without warning.
He was angry about this; who would cook his food?
Who would wash his clothes and clean around the toilet?

He had loved his marriage and had no complaints.
What was wrong with her?
We were happy he said.
No one was listening.

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Date: 10/1/2021 4:55:00 PM
Bravo! Caren, many marriages are like this, but few people have the guts to end it. If he were genuinely committed to his marriage, he would have made more effort to make her feel the same way.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/2/2021 2:43:00 PM
Hahahahaha
Date: 10/1/2021 3:07:00 PM
Believe me, she made the right decision. I take up for no man with that attitude. If he really loved his marriage he would have worked harder to make her love it, too.
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Date: 10/2/2021 2:43:00 PM
True enough
Date: 10/1/2021 1:48:00 PM
Bravo! I’m sure this is the absolute truth in many marriages, but so few have the courage to walk away…
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/2/2021 2:43:00 PM
I wish they all had the courage to walk away; some need to RUN!
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