i thought she were uh naiad
.
(((pong)))
n'ow eve
(((wahp)))
that hurt
didn't
hon
(((pong)) **)
*pong; think uv cast iron(kitchen)
wahp; eve'z purty thick
mitt back mine
dome ")>
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