Notes About The Poem

I Thought I Had It All Figured Out

and all of a sudden
time stood still
as if to laugh at me



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

Submitted on April 11, 2023 for contest SIMPLY POETRY 2 sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS  -  RANKED 8TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Few words with much said. So true. Have a blessed day writing away........................
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thanks, Paula ~ have a wonderful day
Lawless Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 2:55 PM
I hear that chuckle in the background all the time.....thanks for entering the contest
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thanks, John. And the sound only gets louder ~
Mccann Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 10:55 PM
Found myself holding my breath! Elizabeth
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Thanks for your visit and commetn, Elizabeth ~
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