I Think I'Ll Write of Love

I think I’ll write of love
twinkling eyes and turtle doves
gazing into limpid space
‘THAT” look plastered on their face
babbling in soundless awe
elevating every flaw
hours spent in fawning glee
she loves me more than I love me
my eyes, my nose, my greasy hair
the very feelings that I share
although I cannot tell her so
I fear she’d just get up and go
her foot - it rubs up to my knee
oh gawd, please stop, I gotta pee
another problem to beset us
on her teeth….that piece of lettuce
and as we talk of reading Chaucer
he sips his tea….right from the saucer
they linger now – parting’s sweet sorrow
perhaps they’ll Facebook on the morrow


John G. Lawless
©11/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Teagan Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 10:04 PM
hahaha This one makes me giggle :)
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Hey Becca, thanks for stopping by. There is always a bit of humor in love's mysteries
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:22 PM
I really enjoyed the way it went and the words used to take it there. Impressive. All the best ... CayCay
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Thanks CayCay, Love's dance is never the same
Warrior Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Lovely write about love...in a humorous way, John...love & light...^WW^
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Thanks WW, love has a unique way of approaching its unsuspecting victims
Garcia Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 11:00 AM
LMAO! Watch out for them girls who can't be bothered to floss before reading Canterbury Tales, they're the ones who'll get you in trouble.
Lawless Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 2:57 PM
it was the best of poems....it was the wurst of poems...hehee
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Hilarious! A treat to read :))) xomo!
Lawless Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 2:55 PM
glad you got a laugh Mo....thanks for stopping by
Green Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 8:49 AM
That was fun and funny and a perfect love poem. : )
Lawless Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 2:55 PM
just having some fun with the vagaries of love in the i-phone era.....
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