I Think I Know Why the Ocean Flows

The view from our cruise ship 
Conjures far-flung images of amber hues
A fusion of illusion and reality 
Where bending arc of the horizon
Greets the magnificent ocean.

The ocean flows, having done so
Billion years plus so many more
Churning, foaming, bouncing, dancing 
From Atlantic to Pacific, Arctic to Antarctic 
And every continent in between.

It goes to war flaunting armored ships 
Designs exotic scenic beaches 
Goes boating, surfing, fishing
Enjoys scuba diving in coral reefs. 

As our dining room turns heads to peek 
At the petite towns of the Mediterranean 
Dressed in olive and orange trees
Moonlight's reflecting from the sea
Dancing to twinkling lights from the hills.

This beast and beauty held together by gravity
Harbinger of love, romance, happiness 
Fills my gleeful heart with its own echo
I think I know why the ocean flows.

August 2, 2017
HM: Strand select V contest by Brian Strand
Paced 2nd: A Poem I wrote and Sent Drifting
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/22/2020 1:06:00 PM
A lovely write Vijay.
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Date: 4/18/2020 9:15:00 AM
Masterful! So picturesque..brilliant poetry, Vijay.
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Date: 8/7/2018 5:20:00 PM
wow, this is such a clever picturing of ocean and shore!! I really like this one. I am discovering some real treasures back here from summer '17
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2018 6:43:00 PM
You are always so kind like a dear friend!
Date: 10/13/2017 5:08:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Vijay - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 5:55:00 AM
Many thanks Greg!
Date: 10/12/2017 8:23:00 AM
Well done Vijay. Congratulations.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 10/12/2017 7:55:00 AM
Great write and win Vijay...Congrats
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 10/11/2017 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your fine win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 10/11/2017 8:54:00 PM
Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem. I love the title too!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/12/2017 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting imagery. Thank you for creating this splendid picture in our thoughts, Vijay!! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thank you again for your awesome feedback,Teddy!
Date: 8/9/2017 11:28:00 AM
Wow, I love this write, so flowing and beautiful. A fav
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/9/2017 1:29:00 PM
So glad to receive your feedback Lewis--many thanks.
Date: 8/4/2017 7:29:00 AM
Wow, this is excellent! I am enjoying your poetry. Thanks for sharing :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thrilled to get your feedback. Love your work.
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