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I, the Mighty Mountain

Eons ago I felt my birth, as my two parents collided, and I arrived -crumpled and folded upward rugged and jagged with a body of ever-changing rock. Unlike the ordinary human child, I don’t ever get to reach my final full height. As I grow, I am assaulted by wind-blown sand chewing away at me. Streams of water carry chunks of me beyond the base of me. I get shorter, but then my parental plates collide again and I regain my former stature or even get taller until severe weather assures I will not remain the tallest I’ve ever been. They say I am rock, so I am not alive, but humans do not know of feelings I have. Do I fear death? Much longer do I live compared to you. I live to see generations of you come and go, come and go, moving about in the valleys beneath my feet, ever changing my view.. With sharp tools, you clutch me as you climb my cliffs. Do I cry out in pain? You tread my rocky bones, creating pathways upward to my head, where you breathe the freshest of air and where snow adorns me. I wear many caps of snow as I stretch for miles across boundless land. Trees and plants and grass also adorn me, sweeping across me with wild abandon, making me a habitat for creatures large and small. In my cleared spaces, you sometimes build cabins. Enticed by the fleet-footed deer, you arrive with weapons whose sound is loud and whose aim is deadly. I watch with amusement as you speed down my slopes when snow upon me is powdery and deep. Yes, you humans come and go, and I, the mighty mountain - with my many siblings and baby hills - stand like sentries, seemingly ever-lasting to you, who look up at us in awe. You can never know my simple pleasures. Nor can you fathom the suffering I endure as so very slowly I crumble away.

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Date: 6/20/2024 12:41:00 PM
Andrea, mountains are spectacular and we seldom realize what it took to make them and what happens to them over time. The way you tell this could definitely stimulate discussion in many settings...geology, environment, anthropology. I think a poem like this should grace the start of textbooks in all these fields! You should get a royalty (for making people think a bit outside the box)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/20/2024 12:46:00 PM
thanks, but I could not even collect money on the movie my poems were in. I think it's so difficult for poets to ever make money!
Date: 6/20/2024 8:36:00 AM
Wow Andrea you have given the mountain, a spirit and a voice. Both live on for eons watching us, until slowly over time, it crumbles away. You chose to be its voice in this brilliant creative poem you crafted, wow, what a write, one I truly enjoyed reading, going back to read it again now. Superb poetry, Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/20/2024 12:47:00 PM
muchas gracias, muchacha!
Date: 6/18/2024 1:53:00 PM
Lovely writing! I live in the mountains. <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/19/2024 9:30:00 AM
I live very close to a range of them . They are the one thing I like of Utah which I can't see in my heartland of Iowa
Date: 6/18/2024 12:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Your tectonic plate origin surely shaped the world. A few years ago I saw your creative work when walking in the Himalayas while visiting Nepal. The Annapurnas that you made were a delight to see at dawning of the day. Best wishes. Tony.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
thanks, Tony
Date: 6/18/2024 10:35:00 AM
Nice portrayal of the spirit of the mountains. Loved the entire script.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
thanks, Jay!
Date: 6/18/2024 8:24:00 AM
Loved how you built yourself a tall mountain, with skiing and building houses to embellish the place. Best for a win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thanks, Victor
Date: 6/18/2024 7:00:00 AM
Wow Andrea this is wonderful. Kept me spell-bound to the last word. Cant imagine anyone will do better. U X L
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
That is high praise. Thanks so much.
Date: 6/17/2024 10:58:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea! What a brilliant write this is on the prompt. I found this prompt quite interesting , but i didnt write and probably wont get to it too, as it might be too late , however you nailed it and i hope you win! I love how descriptive it is and your wordplay here is so fitting for a mountain! Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2024 1:29:00 PM
thanks, Ink. Soupmail.

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