I Take My Place

I Take My Place


I store within my memory,
The language as it used to be,
Before "veggies" and LOL and BFF's
I keep antique words in my heart.
Supposedly "wise" is the operative word;
Age should be seen and not heard.

So

Let the young make their choices
As we once did, and now,
We store a smile as they slip and skid,
To finally know and go.
Their own sweet and beautiful way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Hi Sunlite, I can't agree with you more as I can very much identify with this very witty piece! My younger son is always "testing" me to see if I know what these and other new terms and abbreviations mean because they are not a part of my vocabulary (LOL)! A-7 for sure! Best regards. Pandita
Wanter Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:18 AM
So glad this triggered something you know about. AND thanks for that 7.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Very relatable to this 55 year old guy.
Wanter Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 5:54 PM
55!!! You're a mere babe!
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:34 AM
"I can dig it." :) Live and let live, right? Love the write:)
Wanter Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 5:53 PM
I can tell you're a youngster, Daniel! Thanks!
Green Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:29 AM
It's funny how certain words and sayings come and go in and out of style and the use of "older" sayings defines your age to the group. This was really "groovy" Sunlite. :)
Wanter Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 5:57 PM
I don't know where my reply went! Thanks for yours. Some folks say "cool," some are "neat," and some like me even say "swell." Not really!
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