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I Surrender To You

I want you so bad for the rest of my life, Anything can happen in the next, I can feel it in my bones, moment of truth, When the speaker is assumed to be telling the truth, A listener might suspect this - If the denial was expected to be more general. Every time I look at you, The moment I surrender to you, That loving you was not a dream, Here, where I stand in this moment, Now I give my heart, I give my love, This is my vow to you I swear, And I promise to give all I can. My life without you in it, Is a life that's not worth living, My spirit has been renewed, I surrender to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/11/2013 1:21:00 PM
C Dey- R.... a lovely surrender poem... falling in love is one of the best feelings one can ever expressed... you did so well here.. my first thought was Surrendering to God , .... However, this is the way I felt when I fell in love with my fiance'... take care...LINDA
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Date: 8/11/2013 5:24:00 AM
- A large and open heart can give much love! - A beautiful poem! - Thank you for visiting my poems, enjoyable! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 1:53:00 AM
Very feeling poetry. I feel your passion for your love!
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