I Surrender
Such a great feeling
has taken over me whole
I must surrender
I capitulate
to these amorous wonders
I’m held imprisoned
Surrender is sweet
I have gained and nothing’s lost
Call me a winner
Written January 25, 2012 for Francine’s Romantic Senryu Contest
Copyright © Robert Pettit | Year Posted 2012
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