Robert Pettit Poet Senryu

I Surrender

Such a great feeling
has taken over me whole
I must surrender

I capitulate
to these amorous wonders
I’m held imprisoned

Surrender is sweet
I have gained and nothing’s lost
Call me a winner

Written January 25, 2012 for Francine’s Romantic Senryu Contest

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Russell Sivey January 25, 2012 at 10:59 AM This is a sure fire romantic poem! Francine will surly love it! Great Work!!

Debra Squyres January 25, 2012 at 4:25 AM A sweet surrender !! Enjoyed the romantic feel to these !!

Kash Poet January 25, 2012 at 1:00 AM Very sweet romantic Poem Robert.Best wishes for the contest of Francine.