'i Stumbled'

I stumbled upon you On my way to nowhere Just like that I had a somewhere I belonged I still don’t know the gist of it all But this somewhere seems like it could be home The space where the beat of my heart Has found its echo In the moments when you smile When you affectionately whisper words Meant only for my ears That place where my feet are planted Immovable Even though I stumbled upon you I stumbled onto a piece of my heart I did not realize was gone Until I stumbled upon you
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:58:00 PM
My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.
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Date: 8/13/2015 6:44:00 AM
Its written very nicely . Rings a bell on how how when u meet someone and the repertoire makes you feel that this is the one. Just a chance
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Date: 8/11/2015 2:16:00 PM
:-))) Happy to see this write, Wilma. I like seeing this side of your pen. "I stumbled onto a piece of my heart// I did not realize was gone//Until I stumbled upon you. Love to see your write on love. hugs
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Date: 8/11/2015 2:25:00 PM
Your comment made me smile tonight Kim, I try and stay clear of these kind of writes ;) hugs write back at you
Date: 8/11/2015 10:54:00 AM
btw I love that, how you used "spew!" That made me snicker for my own silly reasons. yes! what I would give to just finally be able to spew out something! i think I kept them inside too much, that they just dried out or something.
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Date: 8/11/2015 8:44:00 AM
This made me smile for you, thinking how you can be inspired, Missy :) That sure must be a nice feeling, to actually belong somewhere, and not be lost. I love how you made stumbling into a positive thing-- really enjoyed this jewel of yours, Missy! And thank you so much for believing in me and my writing, for always being there through all these years....mwahugs and enjoy the rest of your day!
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Date: 8/9/2015 2:51:00 PM
The perfect time to stumble onto to love when you are on the road to nowhere...lovely Tim
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:16:00 PM
wow, this is one of my favorites of yours this summer. I really love it! Just so clever how you turned nowhere into somewhere. FAVE
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:39:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to a true love, not contrived with tick boxes but found like a jewel in the beach sand. Loved it. Kind regards, Ian
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