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I Stare

. In a fervent yes ardent display i gaze When she looks back at me my intact union weakens Initially i budge afterwards vision returns At last i recoup my senses

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 7:46:00 PM

wow, glad I found this one. I really like it, james. love the part: I recoup my senses!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/15/2010 8:59:00 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 7/13/2010 7:11:00 AM

Congrats on being featured Rhonda Hero

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 8:31:00 PM

Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 7/12/2010 10:15:00 AM

Congrats on the "recoup" and on this fine selection. Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/24/2009 2:48:00 PM

i gaze and stare-when he looks back at me i weaken,then in a moment i leave the dream and recoup my senses--i relate to these verses James-romantic indeed--charma

James Peranteau
Date: 10/7/2023 11:05:00 AM

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