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I Stare

. In a fervent yes ardent display i gaze When she looks back at me my intact union weakens Initially i budge afterwards vision returns At last i recoup my senses

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Date: 3/14/2011 7:46:00 PM
wow, glad I found this one. I really like it, james. love the part: I recoup my senses!
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on being featured Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:31:00 PM
Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on the "recoup" and on this fine selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2009 2:48:00 PM
i gaze and stare-when he looks back at me i weaken,then in a moment i leave the dream and recoup my senses--i relate to these verses James-romantic indeed--charma
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James Peranteau
Date: 10/7/2023 11:05:00 AM
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