James Peranteau Poet Free verse

I Stare

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  In a fervent yes ardent
             display
             i gaze

 When she looks back at 
                me
       my intact union
            weakens

       Initially i budge

afterwards vision returns

    At last i recoup my

            senses

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Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2011 at 7:46 PM wow, glad I found this one. I really like it, james. love the part: I recoup my senses!

Adeleke Adeite July 15, 2010 at 8:59 AM Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson July 13, 2010 at 7:11 AM Congrats on being featured Rhonda Hero

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 12, 2010 at 8:31 PM Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..

Daver Austin July 12, 2010 at 10:15 AM Congrats on the "recoup" and on this fine selection. Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2010 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop July 24, 2009 at 2:48 PM i gaze and stare-when he looks back at me i weaken,then in a moment i leave the dream and recoup my senses--i relate to these verses James-romantic indeed--charma James Peranteau October 7, 2023 at 11:05 AM ;)