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I Stand Here

I stand here at the center of the world embraced by a sweet joy that makes me feel so good! I'm melting ice cream that's been swirled with luscious butterscotch. I want to reel from giddiness. I cannot merely stand. I need to move. I want to leap and dance. There is no other feeling quite so grand! I'm thinking of long kisses and romance while feeling loopy! It's as if a wave of happiness has risen from the sea. It's oceanic, and its willing slave I want to be as it rolls over me. Here where I'm standing in the middle of HIS world, I am engulfed by his warm love. 10/14/2018 For the "I Stand Here" Contest of Craig Cornish

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/5/2018 8:36:00 PM

Congrats on being # 2 in the top 100!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/5/2018 5:29:00 PM

Hello Andrea, congrads on your win. A beautiful written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/5/2018 4:43:00 PM

Center Middle Standing in a Pool of Love His Fantastic Andrea Love this

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/26/2018 11:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win. This is filled with joy, a wonderful feeling, a wonderful poem.

Jay Moore

Date: 10/26/2018 10:24:00 AM

Nice work. Congrats also

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/24/2018 5:48:00 PM

Hi Andrea, congratulations for your win in the contest. This is such a beautiful write my friend. This was worthy of being on any winners list. I find such peace within the words. You have crafted a beautiful piece. A Fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/23/2018 11:45:00 PM

CONGRATS Andrea to win.

Joseph May

Date: 10/22/2018 10:50:00 PM

Beautiful write Andrea..Congrats on your win..Soup mail

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/22/2018 4:26:00 PM

coming back with congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/22/2018 3:58:00 PM

Back with more congrats, Andrea.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2018 9:56:00 PM

Lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/21/2018 6:08:00 PM

Enormously satisfying, the wave you ride cannot help but crash with delight upon the world of this man you love. And your love just like the sea, is witness to the fact that there is no end of crashing waves.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2018 8:26:00 PM

Oh yes, I remember this delicious poem! Congratulations, sweet lady!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/20/2018 1:45:00 PM

I'm guess most went to sorrow, challenge or despair with this theme, but you are right - one can feel the intoxication of 'good' as described by you. I found it contagious. So glad you placed, sweetie - very glad. Love ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2018 11:39:00 PM

I am glad too . Was wondering if the sponsor would like it or not. Thanks, sweet Caycay.

Constance La France

Date: 10/19/2018 9:15:00 AM

Andrea, you have penned a beautiful joyful poem for the contest, I like it a lot, and best of luck ~

John Gondolf

Date: 10/16/2018 3:09:00 PM

Sounds like you are loopy in love...best of luck in the contest. John

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2018 4:42:00 PM

sounds like. It's fictional.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2018 3:46:00 AM

Andrea: I think your muse has been on fire in the best possible way. I've only read 2 so far but you are rocking some serious talent. Each poem is complete joy to my senses. You really can lite me up. Love ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2018 4:43:00 PM

thanks so much, Caycay. Glad you think so.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/16/2018 1:21:00 AM

That's very beautiful Andrea, it makes me travel back in time a wee bit.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2018 12:06:00 PM

Oh yes, your describe that heady emotion of falling in love so vividly with your delicious and exhilarating imagery. Your sonnet shines in its romantic beauty! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/15/2018 11:08:00 AM

What awesome images you employ to create your perception of God's world. I was moved by your faith, especially in the final line, Andrea. Wishing you success in Craig's contest with this beauty! Hugs, Carolyn

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/15/2018 10:42:00 AM

That is a beautiful view at the "center of the world". Good luck in the contest.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/14/2018 11:21:00 PM

"I'm melting ice cream that's been swirled/ with luscious butterscotch"- say no more! ;D Beautiful poem- love it! ;)

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/14/2018 10:10:00 PM

I like how in the end he could be God or that dreamy love interest. And also, I loved how you were enveloped in the joy of an appreciation of just feeling that joy.

Chris Hagy

Date: 10/14/2018 8:58:00 PM

I don't have much time tonight, but I had to read your latest! this is so lushly smooth and beautifully written...you describe how I used to feel when taking bare back rides on my horse. Love this Andrea :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/14/2018 8:54:00 PM

Delicious poem! I love butterscotch!